| "Dance on ice" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: April 24, 2004 19:15 CDT
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I do love your stories!!! They are great!! Now if you could just update them a little faster.. it would be great!! . . . . . . so far i think this one is the best!! . . . . . . although a sequal for the one you just fin would be great too!! .. . and lemon please!!!
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Reviewed By: Witch Child (not signed in) On: April 23, 2004 13:13 CDT
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GREAT CHAPTER! I can't believe you ended it there!NO! PLEASE write more soon!
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Reviewed By: Miyumi [not signed in] On: April 22, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww.. you just had to leave a cliff hanger!!! Gr.........! Please update soon!!!!! I love this fanfic!!! please..*gets down and bows on hands and knees* ~Miyumi
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Title: LOVED IT!!!
Reviewed By: savahna On: April 21, 2004 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey loved it please write more soon!!! I liked that you gave sess a good side but still kept him like a ice man!!! I would really like to read the next chapter so please hurry for I am not a patient person, although I maybe for this story I loved it to say the least I will check back every day or so to see if you updated. C-ya
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Reviewed By: Witch Child [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! At first I thought they were moving a bit fast but then I just gave up analysing it and enjoyed. lol. Its a great story and i cant wait for the next chapter. I'm gonna die if you dont tell us what his mother told him before she died although i have a feling it has something to do with him never finding love or something else that he wants with Kagome that she said would never happen. *shrugs* It's kinda hard to read Rin as a 'mean' person but then again we never know what she would have been like as an adult. Your a great writter though and I love this story. Did you get the idea from 'The Cutting Edge'? I thought so at first but then it took that twist and now its nothing like it. doesn't matter though. its still great. well gotta go and wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Lainey On: April 14, 2004 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this story is WAY too rushed. It was what in like the third or maybe fourth chapter that Sesshoumaru PROPOSED to Kagome?! They weren't even dating! You can't even spell! You're probably at a fourth grade reading level. Something is going on with your format becuase it cuts off the first couple of words. FIX IT! That is all I have to say to you.
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Reviewed By: dark angel-justice On: April 12, 2004 12:30 CDT
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I would say your fic is very good and well written at lease to me. It's is very intersting please continue soon.
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 23:11 CDT
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i loved this chapter and i can't wait until your next one! the story so far is awesome!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Blue_Saiyan_Angel On: April 08, 2004 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this idea a lot. But, it seems to have been rushed at the end of chapter 3. They had barely begun to dance and next he's taking her to his apartment? Like your other reviewers, this is a great, new story. Take a little more time with what happens in the story. I would have liked a seductive, playful dance. Something to get their minds reeling before the business of rehersals. Update soon, I'd like to see more of this. TTFN
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Reviewed By: TortureInLife On: April 05, 2004 13:00 CDT
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hey! i just finished reading ur other story then saw this 1 and didn't know it was by u but found out later. this story is great 2! could u plz update this 1 and it's easier to go plz? thank u! byeeee!!!!!
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Reviewed By: WolfBlade781 On: March 22, 2004 16:27 CST
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how i love the ice. *sigh* update please!
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Reviewed By: Rayearthann [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 10:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, can't imagine sess a ice skater but cool... very imaginative... pls update soon.
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Reviewed By: cybersesshyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 21:16 CST
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i like this story line... please keep updating.
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon82 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a cool story although it is kinda werid picturing Sesshoumaru as an ice skater but at least its sumthing new! update soon JaNe
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 14:22 CST
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You need to spend less time on there phisical attraction...and detailing there bodies and go for their emotions...Thats my advice
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