| "Continuing Lessons" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 11:56 CST
Comment/Review:
I love your story so much! It's so good!!!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikonNoTama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like your story, but the grammer in which you wrote it is crude. Please if not putting theses up ... ( "" ) than please put it in bold print when the characters are speeking? It was hard to read. I love the story, but please make it a little easier to read?
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 04:14 CDT
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Honestly I don't know what I can say... I don't think a story has ever before rendered me speechless, but yours has done that. It took me a full five minutes to decide what to say here.I usually stay away from the darker fics but I started reading and I couldn't stop. It is an interesting and disturbing portrayal and I don't mean that in a bad way, not at all. I am anxious to see where you are going with this. Still I am at a loss... The only technical comment I would make is to seperate your longer paragraph even if you aren't switching POV. It would make it easier to read... Wow... I think what really gets to me is that the darker elements are done unintentionally (by the character). I have read fics (not read but begun only to stop reading) where he is cruel and hurtful on purpose where he is aware and unremorseful but this is entirely different and I think that is what makes it enjoyable to me, that and Kagome's understanding of why he is the way he is and it shows her true acceptance of his hanyou nature, and of the darkest part of him. I really hope that even this last episode doesn't tear them apart. Maybe the blood bond will serve to help see that it doesn't happen again??? Anyway please keep up the good work and I look forward to an update.
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Reviewed By: Cherry starburst On: August 25, 2005 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU HAD BETTER CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ONE OF THE GREATEST STORYS I'VE EVER READ {AND THERE ARE ONLY A FEW}!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE I BEG OF YOU CONTINUE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*n.s.i.* On: May 09, 2005 15:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
update...update...update... *falls asleep* JK! have fun on your trip! Can't wait for your next chappy! Muah!
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Title: Continuing Lessons
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 01:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*n.s.i* On: May 03, 2005 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: bLuBeRRi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my goodness.....cliff hanger! poor inuyasha...dun cry my lil baby! write more!
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Reviewed By: Chetotenshi On: April 22, 2005 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it please update asap ^_^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! you can't just leave us hanging like that! update update update! I totally love this! but the only thing wrong with this is trying to tell when someone is talking or not. why don't you try marking the spoken sentence with something like this " or '' or even * would work. think about it will you? and update soon! ^___^
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Reviewed By: elementalobsesion On: April 19, 2005 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how could you just leave it at that you evil, evil person??!!!! update now! i command you!! mwuahahahahahah!*chokes* ahem... yah...
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Reviewed By: mauichick On: February 16, 2005 00:03 CST
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I liked it alot but come on you have got to update a little faster. i cant remember how long it has been but i realy want the next chapter ok soplease if you have it written or even partly written you could post what you have because it is wonderful.again i love it and cant wait for the next chapter so please please update -the mauichick
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Reviewed By: Dark_Lady 69 On: January 29, 2005 07:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: animeloverchick(not logged in) On: January 09, 2005 04:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for finally updating!! sorry if this insults you but i thought you were going to ditch this story or something... sorry for not believing in you!!! ^_^' anyways it was agood chapter. hope you update soon!
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Title: Just read your whole story for the first time.
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 16:49 CST
Comment/Review:
I think it's amazing. I can't wait for you to update again!
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