| "Demon Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Eternal Serena [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 04:57 CDT
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Awww I just love it when fics have a good ending. I absolutely loved your story and I'm so sad to see it's already ended ;.; Wonderful reading though, great job ^^ Oh yeah...good idea down there...can you write a story about how Rin and Sesshy got together? I would love to see that ^^
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Reviewed By: oreo_mara On: May 13, 2004 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis was excellent!!!! I liked the story, but the epilogue was a bit short. Could you write a story on how Sesshoumaru and Rin get together? Pretty please? Thanks. Great Story!
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Title: happy times thanks for the epilogue
Reviewed By: antisocial mint (not logged in) On: May 12, 2004 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how cute! how did rin become full inu-youkai? but very good ending! i love how rin and sess r mated! GREAT writing! please write more inuyasha fanfics!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 19:32 CDT
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this is a great story I hope you get around to writing another one
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Reviewed By: IYWritergirl (not signed in!!) On: May 12, 2004 15:50 CDT
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love it!
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Reviewed By: PJ On: May 12, 2004 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Cool story but I have one question. What happened to Shippo? Did he stay with them or did he just disappear. I liked how you had Kagome not being Kikyou's reincarnation. Anyway great story.
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 00:48 CDT
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LOL Smashing the bitchy clay pot. God I really luved that part. I have been enjoying this fic.. um not sure if I ever reviewed before. But I had to say it's great and Kikyo abuse always goes over big with me.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 01:22 CDT
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this is a great fanfic is inuyasha and kagome going to go with sango and miroku to here own town please update soon
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Title: heh
Reviewed By: antisocial (nli) On: May 05, 2004 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol they still have a day! nice chap
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 19:54 CDT
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this is great pow take that kikyo this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Title: hehe
Reviewed By: antisocial mint (not logged in) On: May 05, 2004 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool explain please!! hehe
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Title: lemon and...WRITE MORE!!
Reviewed By: nightspiritfox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i've writen a lemon for another author but i hope u have aim cuz my email is shut down but ill write it for u.and i want u to write more in ur chapters.and i want that clay pot DEAD!!!i hate her...ne ways update soon
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Reviewed By: Blood_lust_Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good start. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: smittin kittin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 18:03 CDT
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This story seems really interesting. I think it would be even better if you slow it down & give us more background info. Remember we don't have the benifit of being inside your head so we need the details in order to fully enjoy the story your telling. Don't get me wrong I like this fic the idea is really good & I'm sure the story could be quite compelling. A lot of people have trouble writing lemons so don't stress. I only write lemons so if you get a chance check em out they might help you w/citrusy details. Hope I was helpful. Keep writing & I'll keep reading! Good luck!
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Reviewed By: A.R.Y. On: April 29, 2004 14:52 CDT
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Aww! Honestly, this fic was a lot better than I expected it to be. I kind of got a leetle bit too interested from the start. Now I love it ^_^ Therefore, I believe it is your duty as an author to hurry up and post the next chapter before my mind begins to wander! (Basic summary of this rambling review-love the fic, must have more=^.^=) -AY-
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