| "Sit and Stay" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: squirrelboy On: April 04, 2004 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
its funny write more
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Reviewed By: squirrelboy On: April 04, 2004 10:21 CDT
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Reviewed By: Star keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEEEEEEEEZE CONTINUE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!! it's a very interesting twist of fate... sweetness!!! :-P
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Title: RESPONSE
Reviewed By: LoupeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 23:05 CST
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I CANNOT STEAL SOMETHING I HAVE NEVER READ. THIS THING TOOK ME HOURS TO WRITE AND I REALLY DO NOT APPRECIATE YOUR ACCUSATION.
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a total hotty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
asume dude or dudet whatever. That's a great story. It's just soo..um...sweet. Theres no words to explain how giood this story is! PEACE OUT
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
We~ll...the originality rating was 9/10 'cause I've seen lots of fics where Inuyasha gets even with Kagome by getting a subduing necklace. And the word was 'stay' too. Now about the citrus content...One, it was WAY out of character. Two, Inuyasha wouldn't have the resources to do that. Three, he would NEVER admit that someone/something was scary/powerful, even to himself. Four, it went too fast, really really too fast. For example, Kagome is a good girl, she wouldn't get aroused that easily. And Inuyasha wouldn't be thinking such things, no matter how close he got to her. Also, Inuyasha would never suggest that they do what they did. Now, I'm not trying to spoil your fun and ideas, but it's just constructive critisizm. I'm trying to help you out here by suggesting how to improve on your belief factor. The main thing that most fanfic readers look for is if the characters are true to their personality as described/revealed in the original material. If you might have questions/comments/notes, just ask me, I know everything about Inuyasha. Jaa na and happy writing! ^^
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 20:27 CST
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hee hee, wonderful!
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Title: EEE!!!
Reviewed By: colaDRAGON [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great stuff I tell you!!! ^_^! I know this is a one shot (though what a one shot is varies from author to author so maybe this problem doesn't really exist and I am making my self worry over nothing...), but it would be so incredibly awesome if you continued writing this. I would love you. Big heart! Ok, if that didn't work then whatever. Love you're story!!! Read mine..? Yes, do as you please, just don't stop writing!!!
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Reviewed By: someonesomewhere On: March 31, 2004 15:28 CST
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Hi im K005 i loved your fic pls update
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Reviewed By: brittany On: March 26, 2004 00:14 CST
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loved the one-shot!
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Reviewed By: LIL ANGEWL On: March 24, 2004 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Mareana On: March 21, 2004 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it I can't wait till you make the next chapter and I hope its soon please make it soon!
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Reviewed By: Lilly bet On: March 21, 2004 04:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it it was very cute.
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Title: cute
Reviewed By: crescentmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 01:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is so sweet!
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Title: that was so good
Reviewed By: InuYasha loves me [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man that is good you even left it to where an whole fan fiction could be made from it...!!!! Love it
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