| "The Keeper of my Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: Harpy Link234 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN you school!I'm starting school next week,this sux!Glad you updated though,poor Sora,Riku stop being mean.A baby shower hun..I'm planing on something like that for my next fic. Hope you had a fun summer ^O^.
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Reviewed By: Sairu9 On: May 01, 2005 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow the story line of this story is so fast.any way pls keep on updating as soon as possible.i really cant wait to find out what will happen.^_^
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Reviewed By: Kioko Yasha On: April 10, 2005 13:32 CDT
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oh, and a question i forgot to add, can Sephiroth get pregnant to? concidering how powerful he supposedly is
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Reviewed By: Kioko Yasha On: April 09, 2005 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im just reviewing because i really want to read the next chapter, write, write like the wind!And i definatly think soras baby should be born on valentines day, ans Squalls on christmas!And just for the record, I always thought that if squall and cloud were to get together, and one get preggo, it would be cloud, dont know why, but yeah, im gunna stop now, again, typ like thunder!
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Reviewed By: Harpy Link234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 20:59 CDT
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Your ideas are the best.I'm the one who should have writers block.My fic ant even close to being a popular as yours.;_______; I wish people would read it.suggetions remember the funny food things I've got more ideas.Pizza with anchoves and pepers and relish.^_____^.I'm not the pizza phobe I used to be.I got it Riku should try to get a new job or they could go house hunting.
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 22:43 CDT
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awww inu, i know how you feel... i'm getting there... no ideas for you i'm afraid though, sorry...
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Title: My thoughts
Reviewed By: *A New Hottness* ~In a badddddddd mood b/c of you~ On: April 05, 2005 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok let me see, Sora's baby should be born anywherw between Feb. 20 and March 19 so...THEY COULD BE PISCES!!!!! Ha ha ha, and you'd better do it too! You're just dragging this story on and on. I want it to end , I wanna see what male childbirth is like! Seriously!Another thing, Squall's baby should be born in December, but not on Christmas. As usual your idea is unorginal and cruel. Why put the poor man through all that pain on Christmas, some people may think that's the perfect present but in reality it's not."On Christmas morning, my water broke and I spent Christmas in the hospital with a baby coming out of my ass." Now isn't that just wrong? Anyway, other than that I guess that's all I have to say.... Oh you should have Squall dress up as Mickey from Fantasia for Halloween! ROFL! His cute, but gay ass. ROFL, IMAO, JA NE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Harpy Link234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 20:07 CST
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I still want to here about Sora and Squall's babies.Ho and In my fic should Link have twins or an only child.Mabey triples.Hummmm.Would that be to painful?
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Title: To Happy Link452
Reviewed By: inumoon3**not signed in** On: March 31, 2005 18:51 CST
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No you don't get viruses with yahoo. It's the perfect internet supplier, and on fanfiction.net you said someone flamed me, who is it? Well I hope you get an email soon!
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Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 31, 2005 08:34 CST
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I really don't have a favorite shounen-ai couple. I know I like RikuxSora.But I also like LinkxRoy from Super Smash Brothers.There the couple I've been drawing for my fic.There so cute.^_____^. Roy aways rubbing Link's tummy.^////^.I always use pregnant Link and Roy in pics.O.o0 Is that so bad?I ised to hate that sort of thing but I found out how kawaii and fun it is.~__~.I really don't think it's that bad I mean hell they don'y exist so why complain.Link really ant like that I just did that cause a his hormones and moodswings.Adios from Harpy Link452
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Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 31, 2005 07:51 CST
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do you have to get the updates to yahoo.and do you get virises with yahoo?
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Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 30, 2005 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You luv me you really luvs me.;___;.This is an honor coming from a fellow M-preg writer.Do you like Zelda games?I luvs um scept Wind Waker.Oot is my favorite game of all time.That's the vertion of Link in my story only with wings.I'm tired of waiting for my sister to help me get e-mail I'll do what you said.^____~ my dad won't know about it.He don't even know what Kingdom Hearts is.Your my new friend Inumoon3.I'll try to get New Birth up as soon as I can.And mabye get the pics up to if I make a profile.Thanks budy Adios from your friend Harpy Link452.^_____^ Link pregnant HAHAHAHAHAHAH>It's still new to me.
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Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 30, 2005 21:00 CST
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Here we go again.from chapter 5.Roy was wandering about the courtyadr when he saw Link sitting on a large rock surouned by little birds.Roy couldn't help but fall in love with the adoribale sight held before him."Hi Link."piped Roy.Link snapped his atation to Roy.You could now clearly see he was pregnant.A rouned stomach was hidden under a long red shirt and blue pants.But you could still see his belly stick out a little.This was the shounen-ai chapter.You like it.^____^ My friend really did.She went nuts laughing.O___o0 don't understand why Ho she might read this story tonight.I told her 2./g2g Adios from Harpy Link452
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Title: I would love to read your story!
Reviewed By: inumoon3**not signed in** On: March 30, 2005 19:36 CST
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To HappyLink452 Why don't you just get a free email from yahoo.com or hotmail.com? It's free and useful, but I think yahoo's the better email supplier! Well anyway your story's coming off to a good start, and thanks for all the reviews you've given me!!!(^_^) And thanks for giving me credit in your story, even though I know I probably didn't deserve it! Well I'll try to update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 29, 2005 21:10 CST
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I'm tired of just tellindg you about the story. I'm gona tell you part of the story review for me in your next chapter.Section from Chater 3 for Heroes United:New Birth."I'm sick."whined Link."I can see that."Zelda said still swaetdroping. Link topped right in top of her."Ugh Link get the fuck off me!"she screamed.Shadow was laughing like a hyina.Zelda pushed Link off of her but froze for a moment.'Did I just feel Link's stomach jump?'she thought to herself.Apperently Link felt it too.'Why is there a tinggling in my stomach?'he thought.Zelda was worried for the second time this week."Link can I talk to you alone for amoment?"she coxed."O.k.?"said Link. Scip 2 important parts.^___^ need to save room and you probably don't want this 2 ilabirit. "Last night a man named Arilon came in my room while I was sleeping,he gave me something from the Godesses and then he left."he confested.Zelda was frozen."Link this may sound strange but....Can I feel your stomach?"she bagged."O.k."said Link.He climbed onto the bed and gave himself to Zelda.She minipilated his belly for a moment."Hay that tickles."he giggled. She suddenly found the problem and went pail."What's wrong?"he asked in a worried tone. "Link....I think your pregnant." See I told you.^____^.Ant it cool?I know I didn't explane it fully but I didn't have room.Sides that was what matered.I have pics from the story 2.But you cant see them yet.DAMN SCANER!My dad wount let me have it says it wount work on my computer.Feh.Just dont wa |
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