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 Reviewed By: Harpy Link452  On: March 27, 2005 21:47 CST
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Gess what.I gots a printer now i printed out some kaawaii pics of Sora Shadow and Link.There on fanartcental.net.I also printed out my fic Heroes United New Birth my m-preg story.I got some ideas from you but alot are my own.I got to chapter 3 just now and printed it.^___~.I give you credit in the fic 2.I have no lemons in here but a little shounen-ai.Please update I still need e-mail but my computer scruded up again.DAMN Ganons tower.com Note don't go there they have a huge security hole.I had to giggle the switch 3 times ta save it.-____-0 My dad's so mean he got mad at me when he laoded the printer program.He think's I know everything bout computers.I'll try to send it any way I can.Whether friends or evil sister i'll send it.O.o0.Ho and HAPPY EASTER!Hope it was good.I gots candy ^____^.I'll send you a egg.*throws egg at computer and gets covered in yaok*Ewwwww.Hope Link didn't see that.g2g Adios from Harpy Link452
 Reviewed By: Harpy Link452  On: March 26, 2005 11:18 CST
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I'm really bord today so I'd might as well talk to you guys.I just started a drawing of Harpy Link 4 days ago.It's really good it's gots phenioxes in it.All shaded,But I still can't post it no e-mail.And my dad hogs the scaner.And I drew Him and Shadow.I was gona do a song pic but it was short lived.Please update soon I have nothing to do.I have no life*Cries in cornor*. I was gona do a keeper of my heart situation story but I have to finish the first part. I already have some pics.Link,Shadow,Rayman,Sonic,Zelda,Sora,Amy, Ly,And the Super Smash Brothers.That's the whole cast.OOpes I forgot Riku.And Tails and Cream. I didn't feel like jokes today so bear with me. That's it Adios from Harpy Link452
 Title: food
Reviewed By: Harpy Link452  On: March 25, 2005 12:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Sora:hello is there a ura snot ball there? Moe: Let me check hey everyone is there a ura snot ball hay ura snot ball! Everyonr else:HAHAHAAAHAHAHAH! Meo: Ho it's you again well when I find you I'm gona rip out your eyes and atick um in your butt while I kick you ass! Sora:HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Me:HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Link: HAHAHHHAHAHAHAAHAH! Shadow:MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH! Rayman: O___O0 What about the threat! Me: Scrue Him!You guys are the worlds greatest heroes. Rayman:^_______^0 I forgot. Me: If you can't tell I got that from the Simpsons.Bart your pranks live in us game heroes. Link:I'll call him later for another gag^____~. Me:Adios from Harpy Link452.
 Reviewed By: Harpy Link452  On: March 19, 2005 20:58 CST
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Rayman:COCONUTS WILL RULE THE WORLD! Me:O__O0 Sora:O.O Link:I hate coconut '-__-0 Shads:NO....LENONES WILL DEFEATE ALL. Me:He means 'Lemones'^__~ Link:I like lemones ecpecaly with me in um Sora:OoO your weird Rayman:Die human scum!*throws coconuts at Sora Sora:*is hit*XOX Me:'-______-0 Sora:^____^ I meant to do that Link:*hides in wings*eat this dog boy.throws bommb Rayman:O_____O0 Oppies BLAMO! Me:^___^" that colded him off Link:Adios Sora:From Shads:Your favorite reveiwer Me:Harpy Link452 Link:HA her screen named after me Shads:X( Me: }X( byes
 Reviewed By: Harpy Link452  On: March 18, 2005 00:17 CST
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Mooooooooooooo,,.... Me:O.O? Shads:-____-0 Link:O______O Sora:@.@ Me:where the HELL is he! Link:Runen late.^___^0 Me:Shut up befor you lose your balls. Link:O__o0 Shads:Calm down I bet he'll be here. Sora:Shut up. Me:Therer e is.pop disk. Link:turns up cd player. Me: Introdocen the only limbless hero ../....RAYMAN! Ray: Yo is good ta be here. Link:Yo whazup. Shads:O___O0 hii mmissterr ppppuuupppy. Sora:Shakes hand with him. Me:o.k. I was bord so sue me. Imumoon3:comes with lawyers. Link:O___O0 OH SHIT! Sora:RUN! Ray:Hide your cash! Shads:HIDE ME! me:-____-0 thanks from Harpy Link452
 Reviewed By: Harpy Link452  On: March 16, 2005 21:14 CST
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HHHHHHOOOOOOOWWWWWWWW DDDDDDDOOOOOOOO YYYYYYAAAA DDDDOO!whazup. I'm bord more tests.:(. I need morer time to ask im form email. I'd a had 8 stories posted by now. I have a gest today. drum roll please *Drum rolls across floor*NOT THAT WAY DUMASS!*clears throught* SORA! Sora:walks in door.Hies. Me:Glad you could make it pal. Sora:Me 2. Me:So I have Shadow,Link,and now Sora.mabey i should invite Rayman next. Sora:^_______^ cool I can meet the armless dude. Link:-____- no please no dogs. Shadow:O___O0 I hate dogs*hides in space betwein closet and dresser* Me:-_____-0 I'm with Sora your all mean. Shads&Link:^______^ you welcome. Me:DUmasses anyway Adios from Sora: We know Harpy Link452-____- Me:ASS!
 Title: ROFL, Squall a Warlock?
Reviewed By: A New Hottness ~Not logged in I didn't know ^u^~  On: March 16, 2005 19:19 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Inumoon3-chan are you slow? Who said Squall was a warlock/wizard. I CAN SEE YOU NEVER PLAYED OR BEAT FF8!!!!!! Squall wasn't that magical,...rofl! The Sora/ RIku thing I understand but the Squall thing just makes me think a little too hard... Imagine if his cute ass was a Warlock, the next you know he'll be dressing up like Mickey. ROFL! OWWWWWW My stomach... Well if I finish my hw, I'll call tonite hoe, don't wait for me!!! When will I be able to update.... WAI WAI I NEED A NEW COMPUTER! HOW ABOUT YOU SEND ME ONE FOR MY BIRTHDAY!!!! Wuv ya and JA NE!!!!!!! Oh yeah and thank you I haven't laughed that hard in a long time, wuv ya much. JA NE once again!!!!!!!! ^u^
 Reviewed By: Harpy Link452  On: March 15, 2005 15:29 CST
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A reveiw a day keeps the doctor away.^_____^. When you don't reveiw a story dies.;__; i like stories espesialily m-preg.O.O O_______________O I'm wired had to take stupid tests.Damn govorment acesment. O_o0..................^_____^ me wired..... adios from Harpy Link452
 Reviewed By: Harpy Link452  On: March 13, 2005 20:26 CST
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I feel loved.^___^
 Title: what Harpy Link452 think's
Reviewed By: Harpy Link452  On: March 13, 2005 20:12 CST
Comment/Review:
M-preg stories are a $1,000,000 a one. We need more cause there cute,There different. And we can torture men as much as we want!^___^ All they write about is preps and cheerleaders.I HATE THEM SO MUCH!Preps think there the best thing scince t.v. and videogames.They make fun of us gamers just cause we think Sora or Squall or even Link are cute.There a hell of a lot cuter then all of the rapers and popstars.What so they don't exciste you'll never get in with snoop dog or usher.Link is so much cuter then the two of them.Ha we can write stories about us geting together with um HAHAHA!^___^.AM I right.If I am raise the roof or give me a haller.Anyway that's all scpet write MORE please and more goofy food chocolate covered asparigous,and three bean stu. Adois from Harpy Link452
 Reviewed By: Harpy Link452  On: March 13, 2005 01:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh and evryone else jump for joy we did it we got her to update!(Dances around room almost killing ducky to open your heart,kisses Link and sonic figers, kisses Link manga poster,and kisses Game Boy Advance witch has Chain of Memories in it)I just beat Malificent and in Twilight Town.Bitch dragon!^___^ I just had 57 powdered doughnuts.Ho and the poster it from Zelda no desentu did I spell it right.What ever.Mocho gosto senior Link.hope I spelt it right if not I'm pethedic and hpoe that's the right expration i'm trien to say I Love Link in spanish.Sora give birth allready or at lest get to your 6th month.I want riku to sufer through your mood swings and cravings.I got a goofy food sugjetion,Pickle Pinapple smoothies or meatloaf and garbonzo paste sandwitches.^__^.Hehe I'm evil.Well that's all Adios from Harpy Link452
 Title: You welcome ^__^
Reviewed By: Harpy Link452  On: March 13, 2005 01:25 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You very welcome I really didn't get it till now . Your not the only one who writes this sort of thing,what about that move junior.^__^0. O__O0.Link:Not again you writen to that m-preg girl again!Me:Ya want me ta do the same thing to you.Link:Dono I was thinken about haven kids.Me:O.O didn't know you felt that way Linky-chan.Link:O///O mabey I shouldnt a said anythin.Me: you wouldn't last 5 minets in labor.^//^.Link:Bet I could!Me:Your on elfy. Link:If I can't Sora can't.Me:why?Link:He's too young.Me:-___-0 well any way thanks for menchoning me I'm in another story on this site it's called Sleeping Rose.I will try to get logged in on here.I have to wait for my dad's pemison.;___;.Adios from you gessed it Harpy Link452.
 Title: n.n
Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 12, 2005 16:37 CST
Comment/Review:
thas kool n.n wooo n.n cant wait... i'm getting to update mine... soon soon soon... pwomise... i hope..
 Title: Am I anoying
Reviewed By: Harpy Link452  On: March 09, 2005 21:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Please explane the whole pregnancy thing to me? I mean I know how it works but how can it work on Sora and Leon?What alien experimantation.O___o0. O.k. I'm weirden myself out now.My only prob is that ya need to explain it to the few of us who only have Chain of Memories.I.e.Me.;_;. Well Sony was being an asshole at E3 last year.Nintendo bashen smut mongers.Well on the same page anybody besides me happy about the new Zelda comen out ^__^.Link was so sezzy.anywho back on topic i love the story update NOW i can't wait.Adios from Harpy Link452
 Title: I'm not alone!
Reviewed By: Harpy Link452  On: March 07, 2005 23:26 CST
Comment/Review:
YAIES! I'm not the only one who reviewed late ^___^.Adios from Harpy Link452
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