| "The Keeper of my Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Title: INUMOON3-CHAN!!! MY INTERNET IS BACK!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY YAY YAY!!!!!! I GOT IT BACK HOE! I GOT IT BACK BITCH!!!! YAYA YAYA YAYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyway, I didn't like this chpater, Mikan was being a bitch... And you made Sora too girly!! Well antway j/k with the enjoyment factor! I'M NOT A BIG MEANIE LIKE YOU HOE!! AND YOU'D BETTER SEND ME SOMETHING FOR MY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please...I need money, send me some money ok!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well I'll call you on the weekend or Tuesday!!! SO JA NE!
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Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 05, 2005 17:37 CST
Comment/Review:
It did it again sorry from Harpy Link452.
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Title: >__
Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 05, 2005 17:36 CST
Comment/Review:
MY THING SCRUED UP I SAID ADIOS FROM HARPY LINK452 LAST TIME AND IT CUT IT OFF.I'M PISSED OFF BIG TIME.>____
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Title: Here we go again
Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 05, 2005 17:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm writing another review.I'm really bord today so back off.Sora is such a sweety maby a little too sweet for his own good.I mean if Riku keeps sayen crap about not haven kids.SCRUE HIM he's not the pregnant 1 now is he.O///O.Didn't think so ^___~.Link:What ya writen? Me:Go sit on a egg beack brain.Link:>__
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Title: I'm EXCITED
Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 04, 2005 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I just reveiwed it 5 seconds ago.but I wasent done before.Riku was really sweet and he was so kind when Sora was upset at the end of the story.I bet Sora's gona be a great(Mama?)Squal was so sad in chapter 4 I think?(I read it 3 days ago)Cloud is such a CHICKEN cluck,cluck. I really anjoy the way you discribe the boys bodies are. ho well. O.K. I'm done now Adios from Harpy Link452.
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Title: my first reveiw
Reviewed By: Harpy Link 452 On: March 04, 2005 21:22 CST
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I realy liked the way you told the story except all the lemons. Why so many ho well it's your fic. You know this is my first ever review online no lie.Learned that from yall.I'm a huge Link,Sora,Sonic,Shadow,and Rayman Freak! And I'd like ta join up with you guys. But I'm rambaling ether way your story ROCKS! only resones I'm dooen this is too see the next part.OH and I have a suggetion sora's kids should be 1Boy and 2girls and they should be born in the spring. Why because it's warmer. And you should speed this thing up here I wanta hear about Sora's 6th month.And Clowd's really mean too Squal I feel sorry for him.That's all hope you finish this up bye.
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Title: Pregnancy
Reviewed By: ILoveRiku On: February 25, 2005 10:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this FanFic! The whole Pregnancy thing is Adorable. But the way you've made Sora act is even more Adroable!! Riku is just the same old Sexy Riku! Leon...woah! I think you did a nice job on his additude! and I swear I thought Cloud would be the one to be pregnant! but anyways all in all its great! I loved the Kiari bashing. I don't hate her..but I don't exactly like her either..kinda like Riku, huh? lol. Please update soon! I'm addicted to these type of storys!!
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Title: camigirl4k3
Reviewed By: camigirl4k3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, long time no update. but I love it just the same. and I think I good month for the baby would be january.I dunno, I just picture sora holding newborn baby while snow is coming down..so kawaii!! but yea..also because january is very lucky..*cough* for matters that will remain unknown*cough* anyway. I'm very interested on how they can have babies and where it'll come out in all that stuff...since u said you couldn't put it in the story, then how bout' (if you have time of course) you could e-mail it to me. like explainin it or something... It's not that I'm perverted..(far from it) I'm just curious..lol this is one of the best sites on this site! I love it! keep writing and ..never open a cardoor while on the freeway! until ur next update! -ja ne
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 22:33 CST
Comment/Review:
WOO!!! you finnally updated!!! it took my like 3 days to read the thing XD but it was GREAT!!! i WILL update SOON, ASAP, I PROMISE!!! LOVE YAHS!!! BYES!
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 18:47 CST
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Yah, I though you might like the pic XP Heh, I drew it at school and it was funny... heh... miss yous... update soon... byz
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Reviewed By: demon_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE your fic :) its high up ther on one of the best fics i ever read! please continue writing this! :)
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Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good ending:EVERYONE GETS STRAIGHT. And another thing,stop using my name before lemons.i got in trouble for your DBZ story and im only gonna reed action stories from now on,besides this.
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: camigirl4k3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 07:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um awesome story! ...though that was kinda evil that you put like 700 spaces inbetween the sentences....lol clever girl! but neway..in short your story rocks .update soon.lol
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Title: BITCH! YOU REVIEWED YOUR OWN STORY!!!! >o
Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You little hoe! You reviewed your own story, I HATE YOU! Maybe that's why you didn't see Gravitation 5 and 6 yet, hahahah lol! I'm sooo mean ^u^ And I thought you were fair, hey did I read these updates yet? Hmmmmm. NOPE! I'll read it later, and I'm updating today!!!!! YA Y! I know some people have been waiting, JA NE! And stop being a revview whore!!!!!! Luv ya, ^u^ chu chu kisses for you!! JA NE once again!!!!!
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Title: This fic rocks!!!
Reviewed By: yaoi_fan-girl 72 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I love this story please update soon...oh and i love the idea that squall is having three babies or more (^_^)!!! anyway update soon i can't wait till the next chapter so hurry up and kairi's a bitch and sora and riku r just to cute!!!!
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