| "The Keeper of my Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: heather aka kasumi1205 On: November 28, 2004 21:59 CST
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OMG you gotta do more chapters and please please hurry. im not trying to rush you or anything though...i agree with you kairi is a bitch..I think kairi needs to have a near fatal accident again..that was funny.. you are amazing.. ps.please please please update!! ( ^_^ )
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Title: good good good
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please hurry with the story please!!!!!!! i just cant wait for the rest of it
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 18:52 CST
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ya... that was short... you cheater... puting like five lines between each sentence so it looked big... heh... smart... update soon... i miss da updatedness... ^_^
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you think Squall and Cloud should get back together? yes i do they seem lonely Do you think Squall should also have more than one child? yes the more the merrier And finally do you think Sora and Riku should get married right away and then start facing random conflicts or wait to get married and overcome all their conflicts before hand? i think that they should wait a little longer to over come the differences
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Reviewed By: Dreamers On: November 22, 2004 21:31 CST
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Yes Cloud and Squall should get back together and it would be interesting to see multiple mini Clouds running around. Riku and Sora get married and then have all sorts of problems.
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Reviewed By: Da_pepsi_girl On: November 19, 2004 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It a good story, but I can't read it with out lol. My mom thinks am crazy now!
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Reviewed By: kasumi1205 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please PLEASE please UPDATE!! i wanna know what happens with sora and riku..i've never been a fan of gay fics but this is an exception! I love this storie!!!!!
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Title: My ideas.....
Reviewed By: camigirl4k3 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes squall and cloud should get back together and no I think they should only have one child....I dunno but one child just fits well with that pair....maybe because...I don't think squall can handle two...and secondly...it will make riku and sora's situation that much funnier...lol, also, yes I think Riku and sora should get married right now and face all the situations to come...it would be better for their child and they won't break up as easily....because they remember 'that's my husband' instead of just 'boyfriend' if you put it at the end...it takes more of the romantic stuff that u can do out of it....especially the wedding night^__^ (I mean I've never seen sora and riku, ion a fanfic, get married before...it would have to make tis story my favorite...) lol and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 20:16 CST
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YES!!! though the sex'd be funny if they didnt... and ya, like you said, itd be funny with 3 lil clouds... hehe... and i think they should do the conflict thing first... THEN get married...
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Reviewed By: it doesn't matter On: November 11, 2004 19:29 CST
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Yes, Squall and Cloud should get back together and yes they should have more than one child! Lastly, Sora and Riku should get married first and face random conflicts afterwards. There, are you happy now?
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 11:54 CST
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YAY!!! life has meaning again!!! X.x heh... ya... missed you, continue more ^_^
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Reviewed By: PSL On: November 02, 2004 12:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is great! You need to update soon cuz I'm becomming addicted.
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Reviewed By: Shizu_chan21 On: October 18, 2004 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a tremendous fic going on here. I really hope you continue to update. Thank you for such great entertainment. Your story really hits on all of my emotions. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Da-Pepsi-girl On: October 07, 2004 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
My friend Carter had a dream that he was having a baby too. good fic, Keep going!!!!!!!!!! (: *Smiles*
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Title: BUSTED!!!
Reviewed By: Inumoon3 (signed out) On: October 03, 2004 15:42 CDT
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Hello minna-san!!! I not gonna be able to update for a while, because I'm grounded... I've written the next chapter and as soon as I'm off punishment I'll post the next chapter. I'm sneaking to write this so I can't say too much, bye!!! P.S: Still read and review!!!
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