| "The Keeper of my Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 21:13 CDT
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NEW EMAIL ADDRESS: FLUFFYINULUVER@aol.com! So email me whenever you just can't wait for an update or you just want to say hi!!!
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Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok heres the thing,this story sucks more than a bowl of festering ticks.YOU`RE A HORRIBLE AUTHOR!!!! You should just go to hell....jk. Good story...but im more of a fan of action and guy/girl romance......lesbian beats gay,but then again im a boy.....well,keep it up...and read AWAKENING!
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Title: woo!
Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 21:59 CDT
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go u!!! thnx fer ur reivew... i updated... now ur turn... its review tag! ^_^ hehe... ya... um... hm.. i didnt no u had honors... wow... go u... i hav english fer honors and thats it... WOW... well um... hope to talk soon.. buh byz.. ^_^
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 13:34 CDT
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YAY!!!!!!!!! that was awsum!!! yay!!! i so happy... so ya... i just relized i hav u on aim... -_- i feel stupid... well ya... thnx... um... update soon... or i will send george to eat u... and ur muses mwahahahaha... *cough* srry... ok so ya... buh byz
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 15:04 CDT
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grrrrrrrr... i got a email sayin u updated and i get this!!! ahhhh!!! u bring pain... hury hury with the updating the reel story plz... im tired of waitin...
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Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have this freakin feeling that im the only boy who likes this fic.You see,i hate when girls do guy/guy stories,cause im not gay or bisexual,but yours remains to be cool.I did get grounded cause i was caught reading it,though.Anyways,could you pretty please review my story AWAKENING and if you played FF10,you may like Jecht`s Journey And have you read my Cid Highwind fic yet? I think you did and you apologized.it`s ok,im probably the worst author on this site.
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Reviewed By: [ST]*Shinigami On: August 02, 2004 09:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant....Hilarious...Left me in stitches! Got some funny ideas there, but I think Kairi should have died. Just died. This has got to be the funniest Kingdom Hearts Ive ever read!
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Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 10:58 CDT
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so i made to part 1`s for Um....Anyways i love you story.I hate male-male stories usually.But you made the first good one.You see im a boy,so i think lesbians are more casual.Inumoon3,you are probably one of the best authors out there,but do what i do.Use those talents to make stories children dont have to sneak to read.Oh by the way.....REVIEW MY FICS!!!!! I think you`ll like the Cid Highwind show.And at the bottom of Where`s Cloud?,how come im not there.
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Reviewed By: Ezri-Candy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hee Hee! I just love this story and I'm glad that I stumbled across it. I like mpreg stories but they are quite rare. I think that you are doing a great job with this. Keep up the good work! Ezri-Candy ps. I love your author's notes, sora and riku are just so cute in them!
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Title: vash
Reviewed By: gunslingeroutlaw [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so great i love it and u need to write more im becoming obsesed with it and read l fro 1-13 and nowits 1:02 and im going to bed so please write moreoh and by the way if my parents fund out i was gay tey would react a lot more then riku and soras parents did. and male pregnency wow and u need to get cloud out of sephrothe house what wre u thinking that is not a good pair sephroth can be controling at times anyway keep on doing what ur doing more yaoi and lemon (hehehe)
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 10:57 CDT
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yay! i got to read the next chapter b4 i leave! yay!!! ok... wow... stupid cloud... he's unbelievably stupid... even tho u said they might get back 2gether... wow... ya... cant wait to get the next chapter... but i'll have to i guess... maybe i'll get luky and it'll b dun wen i get bak... well um... ya... um... c u l8r... well.. u no wat i mean... buh by ^_^
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 21:01 CDT
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Title: WTH!
Reviewed By: camigirl4k3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! loved the story! but why, the heck, is sora going to abort that baby!!!!!!! please let aerith talk some sense into them! please! I think that riku's just being a stupidhead,they did that and he should pay the consequences!And the fact that he should take Sora's feelings into account!He's the one having the baby! not Riku!(sp) and as for squall! Did cloud ever say no? ....they should have talked it out rather than him running upstairs! ......that's all I have to say.....really good story.....whew.....got a little in to that........
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Title: Thank you for all your thoughtful reviews
Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 10:33 CDT
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Thank you for all your thoughtful and helpful reviews! Don't worry I won't stop this story till' it's finished so keep your heads up!
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excelent... mormormor!!! ur not actually ganna make sora and riku giv up the baby tho... r u? i wud h8 u if u did... humhumhum.... well update soon! thnx ^_^
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