| "The Keeper of my Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 15:51 CDT
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awsome!!! i havnt reviewed tilll now... but yet again... AWSUM!!! so um the baby... BOYBOYBOY!!! unless there's mor than one... but 1 at least should b a boy... plz... um... good go!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moonsong On: June 05, 2004 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE this fic!!!! I can't wait for the other parts here, I'm so anxious to see what happens!!! :( I think you should hurry up and get more chapters out. Oh and from one author to another(I deal in the Gundam Wing,Gravitation, and Final Fantasy fandoms 2x1 FOREVER!)try and make your chapters longer. It shouldn't be too hard, since you have good developed characters and a good plot to work with. And besides, I know all your readers are wishing for more Riku/Sora and Cloud/Leon!!! Make us happy, we know you can do it!! ^_________^
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Reviewed By: PSL On: June 03, 2004 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok you just have to post the next chapter soon.
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Title: write please
Reviewed By: wavedragon On: June 03, 2004 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story can you please write another chapter soon. i can't wait till sora finds out. (imagining Rikku's face. lol)
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sora should get pregnant!!! THis is great,I love this fic!! Hope to see more soon!
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeb On: May 25, 2004 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you better write more. it's a wonderful story. i can't wait to see the young couples faces when they find out there small (BIG) suprise.
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Title: write more please
Reviewed By: ?????? On: May 20, 2004 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more. I hope you got sora pregant. it's great. PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WRITE MORE MORE IT"S SO GOOD IT GREAT IT"S (A BIG WORD I HAVE NO CLUE HOW TO SPELL LOL)
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 23:00 CDT
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Title: um.......part two
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 20:17 CDT
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as another pare of my previous review.....if my mom caught me having sex with my best freind i think i`d be in trouble.Anways if your a Sephy fan i think u may enjoy my latest fic....Sephiroth Returns.
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Reviewed By: ?????? On: May 09, 2004 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make riku me on bottom and riku have the child it would be interesting for riku to deal with being pregnant emotionally. PLEASE!!!!???? Sora needs to have some sort of controll side too ya know! bubye!
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Title: um....
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um....plese tell me how male pregnancy is possible
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Reviewed By: DragonDame57 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 00:18 CDT
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wow i love this fic! um.. is kairi dead or what? ^^;; oh and i love the leon/cloud relationship.... hehe.. oh, and.. i DEFINITELY didn't expect the mpreg! >
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Reviewed By: camigirl4k3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I looove the story, the only thing that bothers me is the unneccary exclamation point, but I already covered that soo...yea....keep on with it and, I think sora should have a baby too, it would be soooo cute!!! yea...update soon
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: gaykagome On: April 25, 2004 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more it so cute Leon is pregent (oh could you let rikku pregent i think it would be funny if he was pregent then sora, but i would not mind if sora is the pregent one)
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 08:39 CDT
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