| "The Keeper of my Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Title: write more please
Reviewed By: ?????? On: May 20, 2004 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more. I hope you got sora pregant. it's great. PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WRITE MORE MORE IT"S SO GOOD IT GREAT IT"S (A BIG WORD I HAVE NO CLUE HOW TO SPELL LOL)
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 23:00 CDT
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Title: um.......part two
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 20:17 CDT
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as another pare of my previous review.....if my mom caught me having sex with my best freind i think i`d be in trouble.Anways if your a Sephy fan i think u may enjoy my latest fic....Sephiroth Returns.
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Reviewed By: ?????? On: May 09, 2004 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make riku me on bottom and riku have the child it would be interesting for riku to deal with being pregnant emotionally. PLEASE!!!!???? Sora needs to have some sort of controll side too ya know! bubye!
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Title: um....
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um....plese tell me how male pregnancy is possible
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Reviewed By: DragonDame57 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 00:18 CDT
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wow i love this fic! um.. is kairi dead or what? ^^;; oh and i love the leon/cloud relationship.... hehe.. oh, and.. i DEFINITELY didn't expect the mpreg! >
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Reviewed By: camigirl4k3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I looove the story, the only thing that bothers me is the unneccary exclamation point, but I already covered that soo...yea....keep on with it and, I think sora should have a baby too, it would be soooo cute!!! yea...update soon
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: gaykagome On: April 25, 2004 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more it so cute Leon is pregent (oh could you let rikku pregent i think it would be funny if he was pregent then sora, but i would not mind if sora is the pregent one)
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 08:39 CDT
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Title: I don't enjoy this fic as much hon' BUT I still love ya so don't be MAD!!!!!!
Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inumoon3-chan! I'm sorry I had to do this. I don't want anymore of this gay couple business. YOU MADE SQUALL AND CLOUD GAYYYYYYYYYY!!!!! (Shakira falls on the floor dramatically and cries) You even used CHI-CHAN's AND HIDEKI-CHAN's NAMES for SORA'S PARENTS. YOU MAKING ME MAD!!!!!!! I like the plot but you can't make my two kaiwaii boys gay. You just can't. (Stands on the edge of a bridge) No more fag couples please, I'll die if there's anymore! LUV YA' MUCH. (I tried to call you tonight but the line was busy! ) JA NE!
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 15:24 CDT
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Title: Um.....
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fanfic.Although it appears your supporting gay marriges....just kidding but i found the Sora and Riku thing Wrong.if you meant Rikku from FFX that would`ve been interesting.
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Reviewed By: camigirl4k3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great story but.....you might want to watch it on the "!"'s because it sometimes confuses the reader in what their feeling at the time....like if you want him to say...."my dog died....I'm sad." or "my dog died....I'm sad!" the first one shows sorrow and the secong one is just, kind a confusing, that's all I have to say....good story though.
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Title: KONNICHIWA BITCH! You know I'm playing! Luv ya!
Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't like the whole gay S/R thing but, like I said for your DBZ fic you wrote it so well I had to read and review!. Luv ya, and thanks for the card even though it had only.... SEVEN WORDS. I still Luv ya, I'll calll ya Friday. This week is parent teacher week, I'm in trouble! JA NE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SorasAma On: March 21, 2004 14:56 CST
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I am not into Sora/Riku fics, and i still am not ^_^. But i hav e to say.. HOT ISNT ENOUGHT OF A WORD TO DESCRIBE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ ^.~ *wink wink*
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