| "Mischief" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Rachel Dracon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 23:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, this could turn out to be very interesting, but you haven't updated in forever. Are you planning to update? If so, do it soon please.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 01:18 CDT
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I feel sorry for Anzu... if she wasn't trying to steal Yami and Ryou! It's funny when everyone wants Ryou, but then again, who woudn't? Hey, I want Ryou to do a strip dance! Ok, what happens next? Don't stop here, this is too good!
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Reviewed By: Maxine Megan On: May 25, 2004 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heehee! I love it when everyone wants Ryou! It's so cute! Can you please let us have a Ryou strip dance (at the end of course!) I think that would be awesome! And really hot.. I love Ryou.. He is my favorite character of all.. Please keep writing-- this is a great start!
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh oh oh oh oh what r they going to do?? huh huh huh plz pupdate and tell us soon!!!
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Reviewed By: al On: April 01, 2004 02:17 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OHH MYY!!! hey its better this way. can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 13:07 CST
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why should you be sorry for Anzu??? She is an idiot afterall! Well, no matter, I just wanted to say, I LOVE THIS FIC! I want Ryou to stripdance too...
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Reviewed By: *koumori wolf* On: March 27, 2004 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hee hee hee...This is awesome!! ^-^ please update as soon as you possibly can, I'm dying to know what happens! This is hillarious!!
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Reviewed By: ajanasha On: March 27, 2004 00:49 CST
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continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!baka anzu, doesn't deserve ryou...umm sry ^_^' gots a thing against anzu. anywhoo update soon!
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Reviewed By: tet On: March 24, 2004 18:27 CST
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this looks really good, and its funny. i'm not really sure about ryou's relationship with malik, marik, and bakura but i can kind of guess. hopw you update soon. you have some spelling/grammer errors but its not anything thats huge and noticible. (not that i can spell either anyway *laughs*) can't wait to find out what happens to poor ryou. ~ja
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Reviewed By: al On: March 23, 2004 22:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YEAH! ruin it! i never thought of this kind of scenario. ruin it!
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Reviewed By: JaggedLittlePill [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aiya!!!! -jumps around- I wanna see more hehehehe HAHAHAHAHAHAHA I love it so far...its so tempting to read more..I can't wait..well I can but it'll be challenging.But please update soon..but awesome job and I'll be back to read another hehehehe Ciao!!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 21:28 CST
Comment/Review:
o_O this is getting weird...
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