| "The Shadow Riders" Reviews/Comments [ 107 ] |
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 17:24 CDT
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hi this is a great story and i hope you will continue it. i know you've asked for help with the next chapter and while i cant write i can give you a few ideas that you can use or maybe they'll help with the writers block. hiei and yukina are attacked by fire and/or ice demons that believe they shouldnt live since they're forbidden. old enemies of hiei's or their parents seek revenge, a stalker is after yukina. although i havent read that far in the manga some of the fanfiction stories ive read say that hiei becomes the lord of a certain area of the maki, if this is true in your story then other demons could be after hiei and yukina to get control of the land. there could be some unknown bad guy and a prophecy about when the forbidden siblings reunite or something like that. i hope these ideas help
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Reviewed By: dracolovesamanda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 05:02 CDT
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hey i love the story u should keep writeing it
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Title: Hi!!!!
Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for writing. I really like the way you write and you've had my emotions run the gauntlet. I hope you can get out of your writers block you can email me if you want I've emailed you about your fanfic the shadow riders. I'll try to think of something to help you
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 20:44 CDT
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Come on I sent you my ideas and you haven't updated yet....*pout*....You haven't updated in soooooooooooo long please update ......please...............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 23:24 CST
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I'd love to try to write out a chapter. lol. guest appearance! >.< not a very renound guest, though. drop me a line, if you would.
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Reviewed By: sesshomari [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 15:01 CST
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So you're having trouble finishing the last chapter right. Well I guess it's difficult seeing as Hiei is supposed to get his shadow on his birthday right. Also they all need to go out, maybe a club or something, since I highly doubt Hiei would pass out after meeting his shadow. Honestly the ideas are simple, you just need to find some way to combine it all. I mean like maybe they go to school and after school he meets his shadow, and later they could to a club and maybe pass out from drinking too much. (which would be hilarious might I add.) Anyways that's probably something I'd do, maybe you could write it in more dempth. Or whatever that word is. Update soon! ~!*sesshomari*!~
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Title: The Shadow Riders
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Thunder Ring [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 21:04 CST
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Have you tried writing back words? It might help you figure out what to do next. It has helped me in the past before so it might do you some good as well. Go from the closest point you all ready have after this chapter and then go back words. It might help. *crosses fingers* Hoping it does.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 10:32 CST
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Ok I have never even writen my own fic and I may be new when it comes to reading theis fic but I though that it would be koo to try and write something so I did I guess I'll send it to you...........but let me tell you, that you had better updated k....XD..........................oh Ya nice fic.......XD.............Nyuka...............Meow
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter. Hope some one does finish it. Like to read about the test and what happens with everyone next.
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Reviewed By: MertMidnightAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 15:33 CST
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Hey hun, I'll try to do an ending for you. I need something to do anyway. I love this fic and can't wait to see it's finale.
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 13:42 CST
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dont stop please
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Title: the shadow riders
Reviewed By: queenkikyo_kinginuyasha15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 13:05 CST
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this is a really grat chapter keep going
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Reviewed By: Blue Wolf Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 08:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I have become addicted to this fic and am on my knees begging you to update ASAP. As for ideas for Hiei's b-day chapter, why don't you let become a Shadow Rider at around sunset while he is: A)protecting Kagome from someone or some thing B)facing an old enemy, like Togoro or C)fighting an evil Shadow Ridder I know, not the best ideas ever but it's a start.
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!It's about time this story was updated I almost gave up on waiting.but besides that YAHOOOOOOO!Update again ASAP I've waited quite a while for the story to update,and it's almost like a strange earily x-mas gift HAHA! Well update soon.
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