| "When We First Met" Reviews/Comments [ 334 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 04:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh im so glad you finally updated! Plzz update soon again, i really like your story! Cant wait for the next chap, i really have no clue as to who it could be so hurry and update!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 01:44 CDT
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this is a good fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 05, 2004 01:35 CDT
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Good chapter, it made me hungry when they were talking about all that food the villagers were bringing in. Yuuuummmmm shrimp fried rice, pepper steak, egg rolls, I could go on. One thing though, Sesshoumaru's boa is fur not feather. But maybe you wanted it to be feather so you can ignore that if you want. I have a feeling the thing that ripped off the roof is Goshinki. He had to come and ruin the moment!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!! *continues to day-dream about food* Yuuummm egg rolls ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good great. buy you left another cliffy awww i dont like cliffies well then agian it does make me want to read it even more anyway UPDATE SOON REAL SOON\\ oh yeah and plzz plzzz do more Kagome and Inu scenes, kinda with out interuptions....just plzz you do them so good, update soon bye
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Reviewed By: Lady Battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is soo cute. it was the first fic that i have read on this website and i am soo happy that it was...I think it is really cool how you put everything together..update soon!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 01, 2004 21:25 CDT
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It has to be Sesshoumaru right??? It's got to be Sesshoumaru, who else would say "It's been a long time hasn't it?" Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: June 01, 2004 19:19 CDT
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oh damn this was an amazing chapter. Yay! Inu got to mark Kagome-chan again. I better he smelt Sessho, cuz "it's been a long time" blah blah blah, can't wait for the update!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 01, 2004 19:01 CDT
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I have a sinking feeling that its a certain other miko... Excellent chapter! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 13:33 CDT
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Awe, Shippo is so sweet and innocent. He blurts things out without realizing how they affect the other parties. It's so cute! Since the marking (courting) bites are becoming more pleasurable for Kagome, does that mean she's more then willing to become InuYasha's mate, without knowing it? Oh, I bet InuYasha smells Sesshomaru. I wonder how this turns out.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 01:05 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 23:04 CDT
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update soon! i like your story-line ^.^
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 02:53 CDT
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hey great chapter. can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep up the good work. and update. asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: May 27, 2004 19:15 CDT
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woo trip!! As if Inuyasha gave Kagomes futon away. That was cute to have them sleep in the tree, even tho its so ackward lol. cant wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 27, 2004 18:25 CDT
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That was as always an excellent chapter. Glad to see the relationships between the two couples developing a little bit. Look forwards to seeing what happens next. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 26, 2004 21:44 CDT
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Awww Inuyasha is so sweet...sometimes. I noticed that during Miroku's questioning Kagome didn't deny having thoughts about Inuyasha!!! *wink wink* Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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