| "Unleashed Desire (Love Over Time - I)" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 15:01 CDT
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i loved it! great job!!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: StarletGal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 06:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Taht was extremely good and different. The descriptions that are in ur fic aare unbelievable. you've really captured the passion of Kagome and Inuyasha (but in real life they aren't together!!! Yet.....)my only suggestion is that you write a real plot with lemons and limes like the ones you used here. But keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 19:50 CDT
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Read this after I read what you had for The Feel Of You... good job :D Can't wait to see what you have in store for the one you're working on right now. Hehe ^^
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 15:29 CDT
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Aww thanks hun, it made me all warm and fuzzy inside. I can't wait to read the new story...hopefully I'll be able to find it the way my computer acts up lol. I'm all about the reviews, it just doesnt seem fair to read a chapter and not review ya know? Common curtosy people! lol
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou(they still won't let me sign on!!!) On: April 15, 2004 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I vote for a series. This was very good. (Well, for some of the other reviewers, it might just be positively, mind-blowingly orgasmic... see above posts!) I'll just keep it at it kicked ass. Do keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Luna Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been an awesome fic, and anything you write, I will read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Raven Black
Reviewed By: Lemon Squishy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 02:23 CDT
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i would love for you to write more they are the best that i have ever read. i like your idea of writing in different locations and moods.
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Title: Raven Black
Reviewed By: Lemon Squishy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 02:21 CDT
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Reviewed By: inuzands [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm all about the idea of having more chapters of encounters and all that. I've really enjoyed your past chapters, since I'm all about Inu/Kag lemon goodness. :) Keep it going and update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 21:14 CDT
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kittin i gotta this is one amazing story. its just sex but its not raunchy. You have serious talent for this....i dont know if thats good or bad but oh well lol. i hope thats not the end. but it would make a good enging if you chose it. ^__^
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Reviewed By: porkchop On: April 10, 2004 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! great job! i really liked the new chapters. they are awesome! is it a good or bad thing that i made you rethink being a veg.? anywho, keep up the good work! ---porkchop--- p.s. i'm looking forward to the revised chapters and chapter 6. buh bye!
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 09:39 CDT
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please hurry! you kinda just left it off right at the worst moment. please?!?!?!?! i love it. rough sex=good sex
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Reviewed By: angelkitty77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 23:35 CDT
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so this is one long fuck session. it is give me and my husband ideas
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 21:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love it!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-1234 On: April 07, 2004 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is the best. i never read a full 5 chapter lemon!!! you got talent. maybe you could make a living off of it or somthing. i love this fic ... buit sadly i g2g .. ja ne!
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