| "Lost Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 14:29 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: DarkAngel69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 01:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! i read teh one on ff.net and it was awesome!!!! and so when i read this one i was like!! wow!!! ^_^ good story
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Title: Woo....
Reviewed By: Mikhail On: August 04, 2004 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hokay, so I like how you make Kagome very strong, and full of mystery, but the way she can just take out Inu Yasha so easily.. Is he going to be the woman of the relationship? Although Inu Yasha would look VERY cute in an apron, I would like to see him establish some power or dominance. He seems so weak! T.T But onto the next line of business: I love this fic! It's very interesting, and I like how you incorporated Kikyo in it. I can't wait to see how she reacts to Kagome and Sesshomaru's friendship. I'll give you more review when my thoughts are so jumbled up from this interesting story! :P
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Reviewed By: Dark cat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT PLEASE CONTINUE!
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Title: chapter 9
Reviewed By: BelleDayNight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 22:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yep, def looking forward to you updating both versions. Hehe...from the plot you told me...I'm totally rooting for Yasha...but how could I not LOVE Sesshou? And then there is Kouga...I'm sure you'll do a great job bringing him in on the tale. Write! Write now!!! :-D
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Title: chapter 6
Reviewed By: BelleDayNight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 22:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay Koji...fix the format on this chapter...I refuse to read it when it looks like this!!!!
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Reviewed By: kikyo372 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 15:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool. thanks for putting everything into paragraphs. update asap please.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: MYOB On: July 23, 2004 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey can you give me the link to the fanfic of this with sesshoumaru and kagome please
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Title: yeah......
Reviewed By: kikyo372 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 05:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool, good, etc. But can you put everything into paragraphs and space everything please!?!? I struggled to read this cha[ter. Everything was just jumbled together as one big paragraph. Yeah... um keep that in mind. Thanks for updatin so soon and keep up the good work!
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Title: meany
Reviewed By: SivlerGirl37 On: June 15, 2004 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!!! I can't wait till you update!!!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu (not signed in) On: June 01, 2004 22:21 CDT
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woohoo! Stuff to make me even more hyper than I already am!!!! Just what I need. *evil grin* Loved the chapter, by the way! Its starting to get really interesting. I can't wait for more, update soon please!
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Reviewed By: *Aitu On: May 04, 2004 22:51 CDT
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HAHAHA- I had forgotten that it was I who wrote "Cherries are icky"... so yes, the dumb ass, aka me, was going to reply to that from your lil' note and be like " YEA!! CHERRIES TASTE LIKE SHIT, I HATE THEM!!!!!" but okay I'll just shut up for now, lol. Good chapter, can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, I like it. Very interesting! Keep writing pretty pretty please with a strawberry on top! ( Cherries are icky)
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-1234 On: April 24, 2004 13:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok sorry about that ... this thing worng withit was ... WHY DID YOU HAVE TO PUT FUCKING KIKYO IN IT!!!!!!! SHE DOSENT BELONG IN THE FIC !!!!! THE FUCKING BITCH SHOULD DIE again!!!!!! anyways ja ne!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-1234 On: April 24, 2004 13:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was an ok chapter just one thing wrong with it
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