| "To Love Again" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nette JP [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love the story!! Its soooo cute!! I mean what really makes a good KenshinXKaoru story is some MisaoXAoshi action!! hahaha. I absolutly love where this story is going and i can wait to see what happens next. I mean Soujiro is a crafty little guy, i dont know if Kamatari will be able to fool him hahaha. well i guess we'll just have to wait and see what exciting things will happen next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: nana-chan On: June 24, 2005 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i must read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please oh please update soon, i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: elisa ang On: June 07, 2005 20:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really like this fic, the interaction between kaoru and kenji is really cute. it was kinda hard to understand at first because the formatting on chp. 7 is messed up so all the words are cut off, but i still get the overall plot of the story. i just hope that the action between kenshin and kaoru starts soon.kay im done, just some food for thought for you.....KAY! im really done.
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Reviewed By: LAChick [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 15:14 CST
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I read your story and I loved it. Keep writing! just two thing: ch1 ch2 and ch7 some of the words are cut off. Just to let you know. Also really long long paaragraphs like in ch7 are hard to read.
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Title: WOW!!
Reviewed By: Inuyasha0313 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW WOW! that was great! Kepp posting! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE?!!
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 00:17 CST
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very cool chapter. Megimi is so cool the way she has her attitude. that is just assume on how you were able to bring out her character! update again
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: kasumi the vampire queen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that your story was very creative and interesting, you did a pretty good job.^_^.
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Reviewed By: mellyd [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 05:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to say I am enjoying your fic. I just wish you update a little quicker next because I am impatient to read more.
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Reviewed By: Zeh Wulf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, don't take the low ratings the wrong way. I really think your story has some potential, but needs some work stylistically and grammatically. A few things I noticed that you may consider working on/changing: 1) Insertion of author's notes in the story is both distracting and not very professional. It interrupts the flow. 2) Be sure to spellcheck your work and have a good editor go over it to check for grammar errors 3) Character development: Are feelings developing too fast? Both characters have had serious relationships before and are relatively mature in age and experience; would they really be so flustered with each other? These are just a few things. I see that you already have a beta, but you might consider having more than one so you have a broad range of opinions and suggestions. Overall, your story is very cute (a bit cliche, but that's forgivable), but it's obvious that you are a new writer and a bit green to the ins and outs of editing. Keep at it, though, cause the only way to change that is to keep writing ^_^
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Reviewed By: elisa ang On: July 25, 2004 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is reely good!! i really like the way you portray each character it looks like you really spent a lot of time developing their personalities so that they arent out of character!!! i really enjoy the plot as well!! the whole babysitter cliche has been played out so many times its nice to actually read one with any substance or potential!! keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: MoonlightMage [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love this story and hope you update a new chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: onnie On: July 07, 2004 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think u deserve more reviews b/c ur story is really good. i look foward to seeing how the story will develop. keep up the good work and good luck with future chapters.
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Reviewed By: Silver Inu Kitsune On: June 04, 2004 18:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww... it's cute! Please update soon!
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Title: Great story!!!!
Reviewed By: Kchan88 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awseome story!!! I really enjoyed reading it and it is so creative!!! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: reality loss On: April 11, 2004 14:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
ohhhh... this is so cute! i hope you keep writing. i can't wait to see what happens with kaoru and kenshin~_*
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