Title: ummm
Reviewed By: EmErAlDdRaGoN699 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...umm you need to work on this a little. there are like no periods. there are missing words. it dosent flow. it would be very good if you fixed it up a little. is seems like you wrote it in 30 mins! i liked it, even tho some of it didnt make sence cuse of missing words. if u fix it up a little people might review more. letting u know so you can fix it. ED
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