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| "Raped Love" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 > » ] | Title: Listen...
Reviewed By: LostTenshi On: September 22, 2005 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just hear me out here... I agree with Setsuna923 about how these are for sdtating your opinions and what not, but as what May-VeggieGirl1 said, about how this is fiction, chances are it isn't going to be the exact same. Also, telling people to take their stories down isn't "constuctive critisism" or whatever. It's just...er...bossy I guess...? -___-' But that aside, I think, I don't know for sure, but I think you people like Karu-kun just read fics and look for the eency weency flaws in them to bring them up and make a huge argument. I personally love this story, and I have not read m\any fan fics like this. CHances are, there are some like this, but I haven't read them so its all new to me. Karu-kun, if you must flame people's work, go somewhere else. I am sure that there is a fan fic that says "And she tripped and fell and walked home and then she couldnn't get in her house..." and the horrid list goes on. There is something to critisize there. I guess I'm just saying, when it comes to flames like that...have it be opinions, not flames. As in, "In my opion...blahblahblah...Thank you for your consideration" or whatever. Unless the reason you're writing this is to make this author feel bad, it is making her feel bad. And if people are calling her insensitive because of her fics, well just read the flames, people! And yes, I do understand I do not have an account, but I had one...and I can't remember anything, but, I shall attempt to sign on eventually. Keep up the great work! | Reviewed By: whykamiwhy?! On: September 18, 2005 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of, anyone praising this story is out of their mind. This story is one of the most pointless that I have read in quite a long time. What in the hell is the point of the first chapter?! You make her all submissive and then she wants to fight?! Any woman in her right mind would have been fighting the whole time! And how handy was it to have her in a soundproof basement? *rolls eyes* EzzieValentine: (what else should i add) PyroBaka06: Where in the world did you get the idea for this? To have a girl raped by her cousin much that she's like a lifeless doll? What the hell, no one is a lifeless doll and i doubt your world would surive. What about her family, wouldn't THEY notice. Your story holds no reality in it what so ever and to put it simply is one of the worst peices of filfth that I have ever come across of.
| Reviewed By: mori On: May 18, 2005 08:41 CDT
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morrri meeeanss fooorrressst ! goooooood storrryyyy iiiif yooou keeeep wrrrrriiittting illl keeeep reeeeading!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dooo i wrrrite sttttrrraingggglyyy ???????????
| Reviewed By: mori On: May 18, 2005 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gooooooooooood wrrrite morrre thats an orrrrderrr ^ ^ < pusssy caaat . . -
| Reviewed By: yukisuke-ta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 03:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue
| Title: sry but i had to add this...
Reviewed By: Setsuna923 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just if I didn't make this clear...omg I'm a hypocrit...Karu, this may be a change for you...but YOU'RE WRONG! He,he..sorry, i just had to, after I typed up my first review I went back and read his! This ticked me off! I can only imagine how you felt! You warned them properly, YOU ROCK at writing it, and just remember, one flamer shouldn't bring you down! You will still have more people who like your story...speaking of which, now that school is over, please write the next chapter! Thanks again!
| Title: Understanding
Reviewed By: Setsuna923 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic caught me by surprise. Upon reading the first hapter, I was force to read on, awaitig what would happen next. I will support your 'no flaming' theory. However, I ould also like to bring something to the attention to those who have thoroughly 'taken down' the one who aimed at your throat. As far as we know, he/she may have been in a tough situation lately. I'm not agreeing with him, PLEASE do not get me wrong. I believe that you handled th rape suject in a correct manner, I will hand you a gold medal for that. I am just asking that others take into consideration that YOU DO NOT KNOW. I know this is long, i know that there is someone telling the computer to shutup as they read this. But, reviews are for opinions, and that's what this is...nothing more. I hope to see the next chapter soon, as you have gotten me searching for answers as to what happens next. Thank you for your brilliance in your writting, and please continue to write! You are VERY good at it. (Alright, sermons over! Please write next chapter soon! ^-^ Thanks!)
| Reviewed By: KrystiCEED [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...hi. if you ever get the time to read this review, (i doubt it very much) i would like to know... who 'mimiru' is. Ja! (call me, you should know my name from my.. sreen name.)
| Title: 4 gods sake !!!!
Reviewed By: saphira_draco [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 02:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god its horibble(not the fic-.-),it terrible its its-!karu-kuns review!!!!run 4 ur lives!!!!if u dont like,u dont read cos this is one firery dragon!!!!ur outta ya leage!!!her story rocks ass!!!ur going down that 'i know all' path.her story,her choice and y'know u could have seriosly hurt her fellings!!!she not a 3yr old or push around!i hope ur review is deleted!!!!!!!!!puha
| Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, forget Karu-kun. I HAVE been raped before, and this story IS good. Karu, you take things FAAAARR too seriously, even if Akito was a girl at the end of the manga, it's fan FICTION for a reason, you twit. Hey, at least Savay isn't having Akito act like spiderman, that's pushing fiction to an extreme. *cringes at the thought of Akito in spandex* The horror... And, on one last note Karu-CHAN, why don't you get an account on mm.org and say it to her face? What's wrong, can't take a taste of your own medicine?! - Alright, that's enough of my anger rant, but remember flamers who think they're going to insult people's fics: I eat you people for BREAKFAST (and lunch 9.9 lol). Lol, nice half of a chapter Savay. Now if you could only get the second half up... (it's a 7 because I never give any Mary Sue's higher scores than 8s. I have been pushed away from Sues and into yaoi, Sav...v.v)
| Title: spot on!!
Reviewed By: saphira_draco [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that karu person is just sad, your story rocks!!wats with all this 'not a plot device''n' stuff its just a story a real cool ass one right more plz!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Kitsune_Yarisha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee update it'sso funny. And awww the love is cut. *Giggle* update update upadte update soon! update update update soon!!!!
| Reviewed By: Karu-kun On: August 22, 2004 23:02 CDT
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There's something you need to know. Rape is not a plot device. Especially when you have never been raped! You ought to be ashamed, you insensitive twit, for writing out of your own ignorance. And on top of that, this is a Mary Sue fic. The combination of all of these things makes this story truly disasterous. Please stop now before it's too late. Oh, and Akito is a woman, so that would make your character a lesbian. If you don't believe me, then just wait until the manga volume 15 or 16 comes out in English.
| Reviewed By: elleven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*tackle hugs save* LMAO That is so me! keep writing, i know where you live.
| Title: Do you know what rape really means?
Reviewed By: Mary Sue Plot and Sue Criticizer On: August 22, 2004 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this is an okay story. But the plot device of being raped by her cousin, please, there are things that you need to have your character deal with after being raped. She would fear being even near men or boys. I highly suggest that you go to your favorite search engine and type in Rape and read what Rape is like. Rape is violence against women or men if the rapist is a man or a woman. Yes, women can be rapists too. Please if you want to have some realism in your story concerning the rape of your female character, please rewrite this story dealing with the rape and it's aftereffects - meaning she would probably become pregnant.
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