Reviewed By: Dionysus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh, it's very good, with the idea and all, and your character is well portrayed. However, all the YYH characters seem rather stiff and unlike themselves, and when they speak it looks kind of hard to read. But, seriously, this is a really interesting fanfic, keep up the good work.
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