| "Hiei's Love" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: maika On: July 13, 2004 22:08 CDT
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uhhhh!!! wuts wrong??? can't wait to read da next chapter!! hope u update soon byez!!
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 12:50 CDT
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update soon damnit!
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Reviewed By: CrescentArcher [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 07:35 CDT
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Great so far Keep going
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Reviewed By: maika On: June 30, 2004 00:11 CDT
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hehehehe yayyyy!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 15:42 CDT
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That was a great story! Keep it up please! Oh, yeah! Yes for the lemon! ^^ Ja!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Spyk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 15:55 CDT
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i like it. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: animelavuh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 17:39 CDT
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yes!yes!yes 4 da lemon!!!
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 17:13 CDT
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Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 20:38 CDT
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Update soon plz! + a lemon!
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Reviewed By: LiLaZnDrEaMeR [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 18:19 CDT
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update soon!
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! update soon
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Reviewed By: Flying_Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it its really good !so plz put up chapter 4 soon!
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Reviewed By: Sakura Li Samurai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have the same story in Fanfiction.com why aren't you updating that one
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Reviewed By: Dionysus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh, it's very good, with the idea and all, and your character is well portrayed. However, all the YYH characters seem rather stiff and unlike themselves, and when they speak it looks kind of hard to read. But, seriously, this is a really interesting fanfic, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: the four cousins [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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cool story
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