| "Lust into Love" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: my ass is so cute On: April 08, 2004 19:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah it spiked my attention
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Reviewed By: girl lover On: April 08, 2004 19:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
well i like it please update it
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Reviewed By: death rea On: April 08, 2004 19:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
update!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: suppper guy On: April 08, 2004 19:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon
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Title: chapter 1and 2
Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 08, 2004 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story but there are others similair to it but anyway i love it and i hope you update it
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: April 04, 2004 14:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
it looks like it could be a cool story. I'm happy that formatting turned out better in chapter two, trying ot read chapter one kinda mad me sich lol. I hope you keep with this
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 07:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting story, I like it so far ^^ please, keep writing
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