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Reviewed By: Kendra On: April 02, 2004 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Jen, well, I really enjoyed this chapter, it was extremely humorious. I also needed a good laugh today, thanks to you story, my day is even better. Also, I'm betting you've heard that song "Suteki Da Ne". The full version is really pretty... but it was deleted from off of my computer... so I'll need to re-download it to listen to it again. But I do have it as a ring tone. ^_^ This chapter was really nice, and I'm glad I was somewhat involved in it. Hmm, also, is Aiko going to be paired up with anyone? If so, who? Also, when will it happen? Also... um... you know, Riku, the guy I chose for Rene, do you know what type of persona he has? Baically, he's kind of evil like Kuja was in the game, but... you can fit him in however you want. I know you'll do a great job with this story, I have confidence in you. ^_^ Well, good luck with you story, and I hope to talk with you later. Kendra
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Reviewed By: REDG On: April 02, 2004 21:44 CST
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Hey Aiko-chan! Sorry i haven't been able to review in AGES! I wasn't allowed on the computer again. Grr... Anyways, this chappy is really cute! ^_^ Please update soon! ~Kiwi-chan
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Reviewed By: Kiwifroot On: April 02, 2004 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HIYA! I updated mah story on ff.net! Fast huh? I knoe. ^_^ you know wuts wierd? There is a kid whu looks like Zidane at mah skool and mah gym teacher's nickname is Stiener..wierd... NEWAIZ I like ur Terran language..lol...sounds like Japanese...LOL well update wenever you kan! ~kiwi
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Reviewed By: Kiwifroot On: April 02, 2004 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HIYA! I updated mah story on ff.net! Fast huh? I knoe. ^_^ you know wuts wierd? There is a kid whu looks like Zidane at mah skool and mah gym teacher's nickname is Stiener..wierd... NEWAIZ I like ur Terran language..lol...sounds like Japanese...LOL well update wenever you kan! ~kiwi
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Reviewed By: Dark Soul Keeper On: April 02, 2004 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey I liked this chapter Aiko-chan! but where was me? not much of me huh! have it your way then! jk. jk. Loved this chapter though!! Ashley
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Reviewed By: Princess Noelle On: April 02, 2004 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THAT CHAPTER! Ha ha. Hey, it's me The Real Rikku, I reviewed your story before. I just changed my name ;) Anyway, i really like the song 'Tuesday Morning'! Kuja and Rosiana are a cute couple. But so are Garnet and Zidane:)
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Reviewed By: Kendra On: April 02, 2004 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Jen(A.K.A Aiko-sama), I really liked your first four chapters! ^_^ I didn't know that Michelle Branch made a song called Tuesday morning though. I hope to hear it on the radio or something though soon. I can't wait!! Though, until then, I'll just read your other story, which seems just as interesting. This story kind of reminded me of the one with Chun in it. Hm, still, where is Aiko? I know Garnet is somewhere new, in this story, but where is Aiko? ;_; Ah well, it's ok. Well, until next time. Kendra
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Reviewed By: Dark Soul Keeper On: April 02, 2004 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Aiko I loved this chapter! Oh sorry i wasnt on for a while! the computer wasnt working so yeah! Loved it! I am going to update my story soon and spell Fantasy right!lol Ashley
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Reviewed By: Kiwifroot On: April 02, 2004 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya! itx me again..Mz.Kiwifroot!..lol newaiz I LUVED the last two chappies! they were awesome, funni, kute, AND romantic! hope u update sometime soon!
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Reviewed By: Bahamuts AngelVII On: April 02, 2004 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! It's a nice story!! Continue soon! -Meep-
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Reviewed By: Princess Noelle On: April 02, 2004 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHH... Kuja's in love. K, please continue! I like this story a LOT!
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Reviewed By: materiathief06 On: April 02, 2004 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! I'm normally not a big fan of alternate universe fics, but this one was pretty good... I only have one little thing to comment on... Kuja. does he still look like he did in the game? you know, the really long silver hair, extremely pale... and, yes, it makes me so sad to say it, red eyeshadow-like stuff? All I'm saying is that a little more imagery would be appreciated on my part... but it's not really neccessary. Thanks for a great story! materiathief06
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Reviewed By: blue-sea On: April 02, 2004 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ur story rawks!It's one of da best FFIX stories ive ever read! ^-^ Gd work! Update soon kayz!
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Reviewed By: Dark Soul Keeper On: April 02, 2004 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god Aiko-chan i love this chapter so much! you called me Rosiana? That was a perfect name for me! I mean Rosiana is that beautiful Dragon made of White Rose Petals! Well thanks! Hope I am in the next chapter! Oh and i updated my story which you already read probably! Ashley-chan
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Reviewed By: RCRhyo15 On: April 02, 2004 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is 1 of my fav stories
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