| "Power and Control" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 19:57 CDT
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Aahhh! *falls off of chair* I didn't see that coming. I totally expected Zaizen to give Sasaki the "option" of taking Michael's place. I never expected the Amon thing. Poor Amon. Poor Sasaki. Poor Michael. What the hell are they gonna do? Bishie abuse, it's so cruel!! Somebody needs to kick Zaizen...hard!
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Reviewed By: animefan581 (too lazy to login) On: May 01, 2004 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so hard to find good fanfiction these days. I'm glad that there are authors like you around that know how to do a good lemon fic with plot. It's so hard to put plot in to a lemon but you did it quite well. i hope that you continue with this story.
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Reviewed By: Scittaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 18:39 CDT
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LOVE IT!Although It'd be cool if the girls were the ones who kicked Zaizen's @$$.Just a thought.
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Reviewed By: Sasuke89 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is brutally cool. Keep on writing! Love and Peace! Sasuke:)
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Reviewed By: Scittaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 20:49 CDT
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So awesome!It's not as bad when it's Haruto and not Zaizen
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Reviewed By: The_Demon_Witch_Hunter On: April 18, 2004 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I read your lemon, type thing. Though it wasn't full out, it was still sex. =D Way better then what I write. I give everything a 10 because they all deserve a 10. I can't wait for the next chapter! ~!DWH!~
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarustruluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 03:55 CDT
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Lovin' the story, sad as it is. I hope Michael and Sakaki get through it ok. Damn Zaisen to Hell and back!! And, way to go, Amon for offering to help Michael out!!
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Reviewed By: Carlo a.k.a topkat =) On: April 15, 2004 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's me again. I'm glad you updated this fic. I hope you write more soon.
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Reviewed By: meez On: April 09, 2004 19:57 CDT
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i like it, it is a very touching story. and i also like it cuz there aren't many hea like this for this show. this is one of the few good ones
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Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 18:32 CDT
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eehewww, old person sex. Please continue, I'd like to see the old hentai get his just desserts. 'Sides, I really like S x M pairrings.
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Title: Power and Control
Reviewed By: my_name_is_carlo On: April 07, 2004 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story uses one of the more touching fanfic ideas and I love most fics that use this. I don't know if Sakaki is male or female since I don't watch the show that often, but if Sakaki is male I would LOVE to see how this story ends.(if it ends happily) I don't rate the fic on enjoyment since this isn't a fic to enjoy. The idea of rape is never enjoyable, but reading a happy aftermath is(in a way) I hope to read more in the near future.
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarustruluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 15:05 CDT
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poor michael...he doesn't deserve such treatment from that @$$hole. as disturbing as this fic was, i do want to read more. i really like michael, and i want to know what happens to him. please, write more soon.
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Reviewed By: Yurako On: April 03, 2004 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue i want to know what will happen. PPPLEEAAASSSEEE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Scittaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 20:27 CST
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How awful!Not the fic but the things that happen in it.Otherwise it's pretty good.
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