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Title: got me in one
Reviewed By: kaitio [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i only gave you a five because there are so many sess/kag fics out there but the creativity had it been seperate would have been an 8. i enjoy your style of writing and you seem to have observed the characters before writing and that is a very good idea. i won't yell at you because of inu acting that way because like you said you call 'em as you see 'em. but overall it was very good and i've only read chapter 1... hee hee hee, don't kill me *hides*. i wish you luck and inspiration for the rest of your fic.
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Reviewed By: Angelypoo (not signed in) On: June 13, 2004 18:37 CDT
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Awwww man!! I hope you update soon! I really like your story. So what is the deal with Kagome's powers?! It seemed that she has Kikyou's love/anger relationship with Inu...because in a chapter she said something like 'I should've killed you then' or whatever, but yet she still loves him enough not to kill him. What exactly is her power other than that of a miko? She seems to have more power than Kikyou... What's up with the creating of the planet?!
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Reviewed By: Hellschiled On: June 07, 2004 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this fic! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Mefdet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 12:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it so far ^-^ PLEASE update soon!! I can't wait to see what other powers Kagome has.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaKoi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good plot and excellent grasp of the character reactions. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: legoles On: May 23, 2004 04:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. Need a new chappter
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Reviewed By: Kalabash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on man! thats an awful place to leave off!!!! i wanna kno who those weird people who keep talkin r. please updaterz soonz
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Title: good!!!
Reviewed By: Celestral-demon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. i would like to now what kind of powers kagome has! please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 09:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see what happens next !!!!UPDATE SOON !!
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Reviewed By: angelypoo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like your story, and I hope that you update it soon!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 09:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see what happens next !!!!UPDATE SOON PS.I LIKE THE STORY !!
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Reviewed By: Kellie On: April 18, 2004 03:42 CDT
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Very intersting story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next ^__^
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Reviewed By: Horsechic On: April 18, 2004 03:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like this fanfic.It is iteresting.Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 18:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting... I'm curious where you're going with this one. Please post more!
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Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: April 03, 2004 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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How interesting! That last part was totally unexpected. The rest of it was used plot dressed up very nicely. Sesshou n kagome meeting at the spring, tho Inu (unexpectedly) attacks her. Sesshou saves her... n so on. But I like it. IT was written well, n I don't think i picked up any mistakes.
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