| "Teasing Games" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Title: AWESOMENESS!!
Reviewed By: Arina On: June 08, 2004 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*dies* TWISTER!!!! That is gonna be GREAT! Aw, man...I can't wait for the next chapter! I loved this one, the whole deal with spiking everyone's drinks was hilarious. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: ~firekitsune~ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww all the embarassment ^_^ I love it. This story just rox my sox! Twister huh? That will be interesting ^^. Can't wait for the next chapter, so continue soon!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 10:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay, an update!!! The strip pool game was very yummy, I love the distractions. ^-^ OOOh, Twister? Is the spinner rigged? That's gonna be soooo much fun.^-^ Update soon please!!!
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Title: Cool! ^ ^
Reviewed By: Arina On: June 08, 2004 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Always awesome! I can't wait for the next chappie......wish I had some constructive critsisim.....but it's too damn good! Update!
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Reviewed By: The Unknown666 On: May 26, 2004 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only seven minutes?! Why not fifteen.....I know you want constructive criticism, but if the fanfic is so good you can hardly think of any? ~Sigh~ Well the stripping thing should be...interesting to read since I don't think there's been a fanfic yet with it. Or at least not one I can think of....Anyways, please write more!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 15:08 CDT
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O.O Holy fuck, I think I've gone blind just from the thought of Jou and Yami in that closet... *gags violently* Please, never do that again in a story, that's too graphic for me.
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Title: my gosh
Reviewed By: Yukiko_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 15:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, you need to write more soon !!!
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Reviewed By: Nina Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 21:36 CDT
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how about to finish off the game, have kaiba and joey go back into the closet so that they could go further then they did the first time. :) great story by the way.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: anubiset On: May 12, 2004 19:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think this may have to go to my favorites list. I love the pairings. Bakura is a fav. of mine. And the whole Seto/Jou thing is amazing. I hope to see more of this one soon.
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Title: the two yaoi girls in review mode
Reviewed By: Synthetic_Darkness and Yukiko_Angel On: May 12, 2004 19:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
YK - Wow, I really like it ^^ And well, Jou seem really sexy I think ^^ SD : Better give more soon, you're my fav ~_^
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Title: NICE CHAPTER!!!
Reviewed By: Alpha Sierra On: May 11, 2004 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really coming along VERY nicely! I really liked the almost-hentai-but-not-quite scene with Jounouchi and Yami in the closet...it was really nicely done. The events leading UP to said almost-hentai scene (Jou's flirting) Was done very well too. I loved when Yami said (or thought) something like "Jou was becoming a woman" It was hilarious! The plot line is coming along REALLY well too, I can't wait for the "strip pool" scenes...that is gonna be great. *grins* I don't have anything to complain about in this chapter...it was really well written. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Neptune_Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 16:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
You shouldn't have made Yami tell Joey. It'd be a lot more fun if he didn't have a clue what was going on. But anyway, great job. I think the next chapter sounds fun...heh. ;) Keep it up. And update soon, too!
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Reviewed By: Firekitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww great chapter!!! but I don't think that Yugi's plans will go so smothly from now on..heheheh This story is absolutly WONDERFUL!! You must update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Rezyra Sugamori On: May 10, 2004 22:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great fic! I think youre right...it did get a bit steamy there. Can't wait for the next chappie! And I REALLY can't wait until Jou and Seto get hooked up!! I'm gettin all antsy!!! >_
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Reviewed By: Rezyra Sugamori On: May 10, 2004 21:59 CDT
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Great fic! I think youre right...it did get a bit steamy there. Can't wait for the next chappie! And I REALLY can't wait until Jou and Seto get hooked up!! I'm gettin all antsy!!! >_
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