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| "Light Meets Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you my friend are the most evil and wonderful person i know! I love what you have done! Poor Kenken! my babby has been tortured yet again! oh, well, makes the story that much better! this new chara is definately one i wouldnt want to meet in a dark allyway thats for sure! Yikes! Creepy, and he has Ken! bad Schuldig and Farfarello! they shouldnt have continued with the subject! Evil Daemon (sp?)! shouldnt have brought up Ouka at all! GGRR! Oh and i was going to wait until my site was ready to ask, but may i put this fic up there? when its done and i figure out how to do it? tha tand i am a member od several yahoo groups, my own 2 included that would love this fic! i also go to a site that archives tons of fics and i know the webmistress would like it! Let me know if you are interested! Im almost finished with the Art! Please post again soon!
| Reviewed By: Kati [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 12:41 CDT
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No...! What have you done to Kenken?! He will loose his memories?? I'm so angry on Deamon. In some way it's his fault. And why Farf was so harsh in what he said?? He should know how important is Weiß for Ken. Well it's even better then I was expecting (it's just grate). I'm curious what new name Geist will give Ken. I can't wait for next chap. Don't worry about pronunciation, it's easy (for me even easier than English pronunciation). Only one though: all nouns you should write like names so " mein Licht". I keep one's fingers crossed for you, German is a grate language. Tschüs;)
| Reviewed By: shourin On: May 14, 2004 02:29 CDT
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mmm this is good.. more please.. i'll be waiting!!
| Reviewed By: Trevanna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 23:26 CDT
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*spazz* But....and....Yohji and....but....DAMN YOU!!! How can you be so cruel! You know I'm sadly addicted to this story and that I have the crack dreams when you do this! Now I'm going to be sitting here wondering....okay so I'll be thinking about Ken most of the time, but can you really blame me? Right. So be swift in your updating...I might explode.
| Title: Light Meets Darkness
Reviewed By: HeatherR On: May 08, 2004 18:36 CDT
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Woo! I think I need a cold shower! I'm glad you're not jumping straight into full sex, because its sweeter with them getting to really know and understand each other. And Dameon has returned I see. He just couldn't wait to see Youji again, hunh? Now I really can't wait to see what happens next, but I was really willing to wait two weeks. Still, thanks for updating so soon and for the yummy KenKen scenes. YUMMY!
| Reviewed By: Kati [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 02:18 CDT
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It was... wow! I don't have words to describe. It was sweet and in the same time all these bonds. It was shocking, but I must say, that I was expecting something like this from Farf (it was hot). And the last scene... you certeinly know how to make people to want more:) But why Schu didn't feel Daemon? As always I'm waiting for next chap.
| Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy cow! that was inspiring! im supposed to write a pwp for two different ppl and i was stumped, but i think that has been cleared up. WOW! adn the lessons and Aya and Crawford and Omi and Nagi.. and Yohji! WOW, i really cant get past WOW again! Im praying you post the next chapter very soon! especially with that cliffhanger! i cat wait to see what Daemon has planned for Yohji, though if Shu had put up the barriers, wouldnt he have known that Daemon was there? Doesnt matter, they all had to heard his scream, i could in my head. this was fun, do it again! please say your going to post eh next chapter like next week! pleasepleaseplease!
| Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 17:47 CDT
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Woot! a new chapter! Mmmmnn, lemomnnyyyy... Awww, poor Schu, Farfie got more of Ken than you did again. hee-hee. Sooo, just how did Farf and Schu come to an "understanding" of who's in charge? Yeah, poor Ken has a house full of sarcastic bastards to deal with. Heh, at least the chibis will be in the same boat with him. I loved the end with Yohji screaming like a girl (bwah-ha-ha!). But I have to wonder who made the hurt sound? Bloody cliffhanger!! You do this on purpose to punish us for the puppy eyes, don't you?
| Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 19:47 CDT
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Me again. Soooo, the other night I'm lying in bed trying to get to sleep but I couldn't because my brain was filled with this story!! I kept thinking about Ken and Omi and them being "tools" and how I would react to suddenly being told I needed to be "protected" by someone stronger and that I'd bend to another's needs. It made me wonder how ken is going to react to all this. I mean, he's a grown man and an assassin. He's perfectly capable of taking care of himself. But then in comes Farf and Schu who just kinda take over. Schu even says to him (in so many words)that he's made to be uke. And although it may be true (as he responded rather easily to both Farf and Schu) I'm sure it must bother him a bit. Especially with what Dameon said to him. I kept thinking that once he started thinking about it, he was going to get pissed. If it was me, I'd probably be very suspicious of Farfarello and Schuldig after this. You know, just why do they "need" him, what do they expect from him, what are their true feelings towards him, is he just "property" to them too?...I can see Ken having a little "talk" with the two of them. Of course then the hopless romantic part of me decided even if that did happen they would declare their love for each other (and he could tell if it were true- thank you empathy!) and there would be hot steamy "I love you, I'm sorry I doubted you" sex. :) So, is it just me or do the rest of you get caught up spending way too much time thinking about stuff like this? Anyone? And before I forget (again) I'd like to say how much I like Farf and Schu in this. Your Farfarello is intelligent, insightful and seems to truly care for Ken (and Schu?). I love that he's not some mindless psycho. And Schu is also a lot more intelligent and caring than he's usually portrayed. He's more than just a pretty face! Whoo! Ooh! Stray thought alert; just what did Dameon mean about Ken's loyalty? When he looked at the bond he said something about a competition between who has his loyalty and trust. Was he talking about Weiss and Schwartz or between Farf and Schu? Are we gonna find out soon or do I have to resort to puppy eyes? Boy! It's going to be a long couple of weeks while we wait for you to be less busy with school. Poor, poor faithful readers...we deserve lemony goodness!!!
| Title: Light Meets Darkness
Reviewed By: HeatherR On: May 04, 2004 16:18 CDT
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Whoaw! Poor KenKen! Why DOES everyone abuse him? I abuse him too in my stuff, poor sweety. Anyway, if Dameon doesn't behave himself I'm gonna come over there and give him the smackdown! But I do think he's a really cool character. A dragon hiding in a human suit. Very cool. Let me guess! Let me guess! Ummm, Ran/Crawford, Omi/Nagi, and Youji/Dameon. Dragon boy needs someone who can handle him. My only question is about Omi being someone to use...he is the new Persia and actually runs Kriticker. But I loved the update, and I won't hold my breath for the next one. Get your school work done! But...do try to hurry...just a little! HeatherR
| Reviewed By: Trevanna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 02:45 CDT
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Dameon is adorable. A loveable bastard really. Cash or check, indeed. The panorama of this story is really shaping up nicely. I'm sadly addicted to this, I hope you know. *sigh* Poor Ken...and Farfie...and Schu. Bishounen just don't get easy lives, do they?
| Reviewed By: Babbling Brook On: May 01, 2004 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I applaud you. Such a wonderful chapter. The boys are saved with a hint of danger to come. ^__^ Dameon is absolutely intriguing. His comments at the end only make me wonder what game is he playing and who are the other players. You did a wonderful job in creating him, and the initial clash between him and Yohji was charged. - I loved Yohji's save the day attitude. I'm so glad I got to read this before leaving for a week. Good luck with your papers and the end of school.
| Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 17:35 CDT
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Whaaa!! A new chappie!!*runs around excitedly* Ooohh, a Tamer? Cool! I can totaly see Omi working with animals. He's just so darn cute! Hmm, that Daemon is kinda scary. And mean! Leave Ken alone, go get your own kitty!! I think it's going to be interesting how Ken and Omi react to being "followers". It must go against the grain for two fully capable assassins to be thought of as merely "tools" and needing protection. They may be Uke but they're not wimps by any means.I can't wait to see what Aya's power is! And of course I am looking forward to more lemony stuff. *waves fans* More yaoi!! ^_^Thanks for making my day. Work was soooo boring. Update as soon as you can, and good luck with school!
| Reviewed By: Kati [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 04:50 CDT
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I like Dameon. He can be very interesting figure. But why was he so hursh for Ken? (but I think Schu and Farf will recompanse him :)This chap was also very good. Two weeks is a very long, but I am strong and I will wait ( no I'm not, I just started to whimper). Omi is a Tamer... I was suprised (that's good, congratulations). Oh, it's not very important, but you should write Schuldig (not Schuldich), becouse in german it means guilty (and it looks strange for person, who knows this language). So... to the next time!
| Reviewed By: wannabeinamine On: April 30, 2004 23:08 CDT
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Wow, I really like Dameon. You introduced him in such a way that I can't wait till you continue on with the story. I feel your pain with the college stress, I just finished my finals. Good luck with your papers and write more as soon as you can! I'll be waiting. Ja!
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