| "To Fall Again" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: innocent_asassin On: June 18, 2004 08:47 CDT
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well...Either Ken/Omi or Nagi/Omi...aslong as Omi is uke, I`m cool with it
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Reviewed By: Eelectric_Barbarella On: June 11, 2004 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! I dont usually go fotr Gluhen fics, but this is really interesting, and I love the Yohji/Ran interaction. Personally I'd go for Omi/Nagi, as I think they make a great couple. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Omi_Hidaka On: June 08, 2004 06:30 CDT
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awesome story! Keep it up with the YohjAya, but if your looking for another pairing... KENOMI RULZ 4EVA!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Talyssa_ On: June 03, 2004 05:29 CDT
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Well personally (and in general people agree) theres a LOT of chance for Omi/Nagi in gluhen, because omi is the only one who knows about nagi being there at all anyway (until the very end) and when nagi come in at the end the way they interact with each other is VEEERRRRY suspicious. Ken and omi however have 0 interaction whatsoever, literally. you should slap a big au on your fic though or AT or whatever, because if this really was post gluhen there would be no nagi...or Ran......or Ken (for a while anyway) and CERTAINLY no omi. Or I mean there might be omi and nagi someplace, and ran and ken elsewhere but not together
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Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 05:25 CDT
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This fic is great! I personally am in favor of Ken/Omi, Aya (assuming you're talking about Ran's sis, since Yohji and Ran belong together.)and Nagi make a cute couple, I think. Would it be too much for Brad/Schuldich? Your fic is great anyway, PLEASE update soon!
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Reviewed By: Huge Aya/Yohji Fan On: June 03, 2004 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Gluhen should continue and you should be writing it. I like how you have brought them all back together...Nice touch giving Omi Shuichi's job. REALLY NICE TOUCH getting rid of Asuka! Update soon because I really need for Yohji and Ran to be together...Ran needs Yohji...much angst there-love that;-) I think you should let Omi and Ken be together. Aya-chan can have Nagi if she muxt.
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 23:32 CDT
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Hello, me again. Another lovely chapter. Made me feel all squishy inside several times and wave my little "YxR 4-Eva!" flag. ^__^ Anyway, taking that into consideration, I'm gonna vote NO Aya/Nagi or Aya/Ken. Omi/Ken or Omi/Nagi is fine, though. Okie, well, that was my input. Have a lovely day! ^.^
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Title: Hehee
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 20:53 CDT
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Yey! Another chapter. Okay then, well hmmm, maybe it should be Ken/Aya cause that would be cool and Omi/Nagi. Bu~ut, Omi and Ken are nice too! Oh wow, I'm not being very helpful. Sorry, just ignore me and my silliness. Write on!! Happy day for the chapter, do have luck in continuing ^_^
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 16:26 CDT
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I really really loved this fic, although I've never watched this anime before or know anything about it. Please continue!!!
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Reviewed By: Mikarin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep writing... This osunds like a very promising fic and I'm so looking forward to the continuation. Don't kill it. I already love it.
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Reviewed By: dita_chan On: April 11, 2004 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so much! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Flicker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 11:39 CDT
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Wow...now that is what I call angst! ;_; I've never come this close to crying because of a fic- you're doing a great job, so keep it up!
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Title: ooohh
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 19:37 CDT
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Good writing. How angsty indeed ^_^ Go you! So, yeah, you should continue writing, I decree it. Nice style, nice idea. Run with it!
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 14:30 CDT
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You nearly made me cry at the end. There are quite a few Yohji-can't-remember fics out there, but this one really got to me. I like how you've done things thus far, and cannot wait to see more. ^_~
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Reviewed By: dead end On: April 09, 2004 10:43 CDT
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Cool fic. ^^ I like your take on Ran, and the vulnerability you gave him--it's a nice change from the usual tough-as-nails-Ran I see in a lot of fiction. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with the next chapter.
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