| "My Perfect Life Just Got Better" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mz X T i F FaNy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The kiss that Kuwabara gave Kaede was hilarious. I was dieing from laughter. overall it was really good!!
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Reviewed By: punzl On: April 13, 2004 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The idea is original. I'd like you to e-mail me that chapter, please. My address is punzl@msn.com thank you!
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Reviewed By: inuyuyurrk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 17:07 CDT
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I haha love haha it haha!!! i hope this ends up a hiei/kak there aren't to many of them and I am so tired of k/k and i/k fics!!! Well I thought it was great and that you update again soon!! Laterz
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Reviewed By: angelkitty77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 11:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love it make it a hiei kag kur you hardly ever see that
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 21:57 CDT
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i just read ur new chapters and they were geat!!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kagome/Hiei kagome/hiei kagome/hiei!!!! You must! You know you want to! I can see it in your eyes! I hate yoko/kur/kag fics! There are too many out there!
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Reviewed By: Mistriss1 On: April 11, 2004 23:35 CDT
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PLz update this fic soon. I haven't seen i a fic this good in such a long time. PLZ update soon!
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Reviewed By: xoul On: April 11, 2004 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please, oh please continue!!! :D
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Reviewed By: Ace Aces On: April 10, 2004 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, kiddo. I like the fic, so keep up the good work. Make it Yoko/kagome, OK? Though I think Sesshoumaru could whip his butt, he's an ok guy. Update soon...I don't think you'll like what happens if you don't. *glares* BTW- Not all men are bad. I'm an ok guy, so lay off!
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Reviewed By: The Jack On: April 10, 2004 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's pretty good. Lots of action k? More fighting! and if there has to be a pairing make it yoko/kag k? Yoko's the man, dude! There has to be more fighting and cool powers or I'll send my fying monkeys after you!
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Reviewed By: Qween of Hearts On: April 10, 2004 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fine. But it must be suiichi/kagome. Do I make my self clear? I understand you TRY to do your best. However, I, Qween of Hearts am one of your valued readers. Therefor, YOU DON'T TRY- YOU DO!!! Please make note that if you do not acommedate to my demands it will be OFF WITH YOUR HEAD FOR YOU, YOU BLUTHERIN FOOL! Do you comprehend?! Good.
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Reviewed By: Jade Joker On: April 10, 2004 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
i like. is so cute! update lots k? it make very happy! ^_^ see? update! must be yoko/kag! DAMN IT! IT'S YOKO/KAG OR I WILL GO INSANE AND I WILL TAKE YOU WITH ME! pwease? Ta Ta! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Joe diamonds On: April 10, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. 0_0. One thing to say though....YOKO/KAGOME ALL THE WAY!!!!!! IF IT'S NOT YOKO/KAGOME THEN I'LL TURN YOUR LIFE TO A LIVING HELL! (more so than it is now)
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Reviewed By: InuYasha2892 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 12:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Update! Update! Update!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: April 10, 2004 11:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very interesting start. Please update real soon.
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