| "My Perfect Life Just Got Better" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuYasha2892 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 12:26 CDT
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Update! Update! Update!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: April 10, 2004 11:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very interesting start. Please update real soon.
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job!!!! plz make a lemon in this fic soon!! n' update soon!
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFLMAO i luv that it is so cute and funny and now i kno how to play the why game yey and also i think it's Hiei (mine) watchin her because i think that naraku would have attacked her but theres an off chance that it's naraku but i still think it's hiei because he might have wanted to protect her even tho he dosent act like it you can tell he (or his conscience) likes her and wants to keep her safe but i dont really have a lot to work with (*wink* *wink* hint hint) so update soon
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 21:03 CDT
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Hiei's or Naraku's? Hiei's or Naraku's? Well It COULD be either. See Hiei likes he and could could want to keep her safe and other stuff. But then again Naraku's a freak and who knows what he's thinking so he could be watching her too.... hm... ::rips hair out:: I DON"T KNOW! I guess you'll just have to update and tell us who it is!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki* On: April 09, 2004 20:33 CDT
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i loved this chapter and i can't wait until your next one!
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Reviewed By: fire ice On: April 09, 2004 18:54 CDT
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This is another awesome story. at least it seems awesome you haven't writen enough yet. (hint hint) anywayz please continue i wanna know what the SD do.
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job!!! what the Spirit Detectives want??? plz update!!!!! and a male profesor in spanish is porfesor, profesora is female profesor.
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Lady Death [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 18:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Miko Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is really good! Hope ya update soon! ^_^ oh, and what are the pairings? Anyways, til I read and review again! -^_^- *Miko Angel*
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your new story! Please update soon! And can you please make this a hiei/kagome fic?
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Reviewed By: D.K On: April 09, 2004 13:10 CDT
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i like it. keep writing (all the way D.K)
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Reviewed By: Suika77 On: April 09, 2004 13:07 CDT
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coolness but i want the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Zakuro99 On: April 09, 2004 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like totally love IY YYH cross overs and yours is the best sofar
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Reviewed By: Suika1453 On: April 09, 2004 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
coolness but i want the next chapter
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