| "Against All Odds" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: GetaGirl 247 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 15:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That B*tch, I knew that she was up to no good. I could just feel it deep down. But, enough ranting and raving. I must say that this story has really been enjoyable to read. I like that fact that there is no "I look at you one day, sex you the next". There is an actual plot involved. Keep up the great work. By the way, I hope that Radditz gets revenge on that nasty hefer.
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Reviewed By: RaditzOnna On: April 28, 2004 17:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, you got me waiting with bated breath. Plaese, please tell me your not going to leave me hangin without a Raditz lemon! I know he's not the focus of this fic, but damn it I'm beggin' you. Pretty Please with sugar, whipped cream and a cherry on top(Of Raditz). I've read all your fics so far and I hardly ever review but, I gotta let you know I love your work. So please, for the sake of one lowly/huge fan, please succumb to my deepest desires and gimmie my hot sweaty beefcake. I'm a real big B/V fan, but for this fic, I'm favoring R/D all the way. Thanx & love ya always.
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Reviewed By: Sula On: April 28, 2004 15:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO *hits you with frying pan* NOOOOOOOOOOO. You better post tomorrow with another chapter or else it will be death on toast
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 11:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FICS I'VE READ!! i LOVE YOUR IDEAS!! YOUR WRITING STYLE IS SOOO FRESh, CLEAN AND SMOOTH!! I'M IN LOVE WITH YOU WORK!! I WAS HOOKED AFTER THE FIRST CHAPTER!! I love how you avoid Cliches! And all your twists...events..>EVERYTHING IS SOOO AMAZING!! How Bulma killed Raja was sooo exciting! ANd how they met was GREAT! The Character development I'm totally hooked on. I love how BUlma and vegeta conmunicate...and I like how you haven't rushed the sex on yet. Alot of fics out there have them doing it within the first hours of meeting! and I can't remember reading such an 'In Character' piece of work!! By Gods! You must continue!! GO GO GO GO GO!
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Reviewed By: Yari [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 23:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, it's great! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sulawesi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 16:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. Love how you post like every day too. :D keep going. This is great. Now, you need them to fuck! :D Go for the lemon go for the lemon! but really. They need to. *nods*
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Reviewed By: Hunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 16:29 PDT
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Reviewed By: helen b On: April 17, 2004 09:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi i love the premise behind your fic, so clever! good tension between the two. I want to read more!!
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Reviewed By: #1Hunny On: April 13, 2004 18:53 PDT
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Ya know I started reading this story somewhere else a long time ago, and never got to finish it. I'm so glad to have found it again. Please update soon I really love it so far. Thanx
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Reviewed By: fire ice On: April 13, 2004 14:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey it's me again I love your story!!! please write more!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fire ice On: April 11, 2004 16:09 PDT
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update soon pretty please!! I love your story!!!
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint (not signed in) On: April 11, 2004 14:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoohoo! I'm so glad you're putting stuff up on this site! I hate going to FF.N and your fics are the only reason I visit it at all. It'll be great if I can come here instead ^_~ Thanks for all your great stories and making it more convenient to read. Hugs! ES
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Title: Welcome!
Reviewed By: Mz D [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 07:40 PDT
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Glad you're here I'd hate for your stories to stop just because of one asshole!
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Reviewed By: mona On: April 11, 2004 05:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
against all odds!!!!you totally updated the story...its even better than the first one...i love your story. please update asap.
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Reviewed By: Crystal a.k.a Angel Tinuviel On: April 10, 2004 01:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am SOOOOO Happy I found you here. I nearly went into histerics when I found out that your account was being removed from ff.net. That is just cruel. You are my favorite fanfic author aside from my friend Una1. I'll definately make sure to keep an eye out for any new stuff by the great Tempest.
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