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| "Death is Never the End" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: GrumblyStuff [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 11:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Scaramanga entered the room and grabbed the bodyguard's head. Snap! Thud! What the bloody hell is this fic? Props for legible writing and decent flow but.... dude. What the fuck? You've taken the absolute worst from SIs and crossovers and mishmashed some hugely incompatible fictional universes to boot. For the love all that good and holy, stab the part of your brain wherever this tripe came from.
| Title: Good God...
Reviewed By: KoroshiyaZwei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry...I'm so sorry...but after coming across this piece so many times I just had to see what the hubbub was about. I didn't make it past the halfway point of the first chapter. This is probably the single worst Self-Insertion Fanfiction I have ever read, and I have seen some of the worst SIs out there. If you are considering why you've had no reviews until now, maybe mine will give you a hint. Well written and formatted otherwise...your premise and execution is pure, unadulterated garbage. Also...what's up with your concept of Evangelion? Have you even SEEN the show? According to your timeline Unit-04 wasn't even halfway near completion and its S2 Engine was suicide at best to test!
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