| "Someone To Watch Over Me" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: The Black Dahlia On: January 03, 2008 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why don't you make the illness TB? its air born so it would make since for a whole village to get it qickly, small pox was also a big deal back then so was chalora, and typhod. ^^ i study prety much anything so if you have a question feel free to ask ^^ i love your fic i'm WackoDragon -i'm just not logged in-
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Reviewed By: PyschoFire_Wolfxx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this fic is seriously like the best ive ever read, its adorable i LOVE LOVE LOVE it!!! plz make a sequal!!! ^_^ --Nori
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Reviewed By: Serenitychan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 19:54 CDT
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I don't know how that happened. But apparently it means that subconsciously I can't praise your work enough!
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Reviewed By: Serenitychan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 19:53 CDT
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You've read my work. And kudos for mentioning Souzou. I have a small suggestion. Maybe Souzou can do more than offer inspiration for battle (see episode 38). I think it would be cute if Sano went off by himself to take a walk and Souzou appeared as a ghost again and gave him advice on how to deal with Megumi. And Aoshi and Misao MUST get together! Or I shall SMITE you with the MAGICALLY HAMMER OF SMITING-NESS!
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Reviewed By: Heart of Warrior [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 19:51 CDT
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The works of mine that I think you reviewed are under the username Serenitychan13! Just so as not to confuse you! Are you confused?
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Reviewed By: Heart of Warrior [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 19:50 CDT
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You've read my work. And kudos for mentioning Souzou. I have a small suggestion. Maybe Souzou can do more than offer inspiration for battle (see episode 38). I think it would be cute if Sano went off by himself to take a walk and Souzou appeared as a ghost again and gave him advice on how to deal with Megumi. And Aoshi and Misao MUST get together! Or I shall SMITE you with the MAGICALLY HAMMER OF SMITING-NESS!
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Title: Wow good ficcie!
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (I don't recall EVER using the 'login' button) On: September 21, 2004 06:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya, I love this ficcie. This is my second ficcie I've ever red of kenshin. I'm still confused who everybody is eveytime haha. I usily only read Inu Yasha ficcie's. Really cute story, really! Some sentence are not 100% they miss parts in the biginning :S your computer is just as weird as mine is! owh well, hope you get that mistakes out soon! K!$$ and Love ~ Little Tennyo
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: kasumi the vampire queen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was pretty good, just check it for grammer mistakes.
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