| "A Betrayal and A Romance" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: kuroi69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 11:30 CDT
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update soon!
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Reviewed By: DragonLadyofMyria On: June 16, 2004 19:29 CDT
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hi sarah i was bored so i read the story AGIAN oh well its still a good story (brother says hi)
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Title: DANG IT
Reviewed By: Sarah-Zyf On: May 24, 2004 16:40 CDT
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WHo ever this person is that keeps telling me to update, STOP!! I'm done with the story.........And this is the author
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Reviewed By: kuroikage27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 16:31 CDT
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update soon please
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Reviewed By: kuroikage27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 16:12 CDT
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update soon
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Reviewed By: kuroikage27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 16:00 CDT
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update sooon
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Reviewed By: kuroikage27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 16:27 CDT
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update soon
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Reviewed By: kuroikage27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 16:42 CDT
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update soon
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Reviewed By: kuroikage27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 16:05 CDT
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UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: kuroikage27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 13:47 CDT
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update soon
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Reviewed By: kuroikage27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 16:14 CDT
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update soon
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Reviewed By: fireice [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 17:09 CDT
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I love it so far. Update soon cuz i wanna know what happens. It's an interesting story line. I've never read one llike it before. newayz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: KD [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 16:17 CDT
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It wont let me write a review logged in....Its Koro Doragon, or Koko(Or Tia from the story, for those that care...). Nice job Zyf, but youre EVIL!!! POST THE SEQUEL SOON! OR ILL SEND EVIL FLYING MONKEYS AFTER YOU!!!...and you know I will, too...*Grins evilly*
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Elizabeth On: April 14, 2004 15:39 CDT
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This is an awsome story. Please finish it! NOW!!!
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Reviewed By: Koro Doragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story, but you need to work on your spelling....overall, great job, and UPDATE SOON!
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