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Reviewed By: Kitty-May On: January 11, 2005 17:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your fic, love all of them! Please update this one soon if you can, because it's killing me what will happen next. Read chapter 14 about 3 times already. I know I'm a dork, but sometimes I have nothing to do so... why not. I like the story why not read it again and remembered what happened, where did you stop. So please if you can update it. Please! Ps. And update torn on FF very soon please!:)
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Title: kagomesjewel(nsi)
Reviewed By: kagomesjewel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 01:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I forgot in my other review a couple of things. In this chapter, Inuyasha spills that he was in London, though I doubt she realizes what he said right now. Also, what will Inuyasha do when he finds out Kagome isn't lying? After all, if he asks Mackie about Kagome then he would know she isn't cheating on him. After all, Kagome tells Mackie last chapter that she has never slept with anyone other than Inuyasha, and that the child is most definately his. And also, Hiten will be by to see Kagome if she doesn't show up the following Tuesday to see what's wrong, and Inuyasha will see that Kagome A) wasn't cheating on him by was helping a sick friend B) pregnant with his child and C) wasn't lying and was unjustly struck down. :( Inuyasha deserves to get knocked in the nose...and um, a bit farther south. But can't help his reaction considering he doesn't know Kagome that well and given his history of women its not surprising what happened. Argh, dumb IY! Ya just gotta smack him sometimes... :) Good luck with your finals!
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Title: ch14
Reviewed By: Raniatlw [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 03:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god this story is so awesome!! I love it. I especially love the time you've set it in! And I sure hope you plan on updating very soon!
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Reviewed By: Anzu2 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 19:39 EST
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Thankyou SO much for updating. You just made my really shitty day brighter. Please don't wait so long to update...please...?
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Reviewed By: Kagomesjewel(nsi) On: December 21, 2004 01:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's me again(kagomesjewel) but I forgot something in my last review. A couple chapters ago Kagome was talking with Mackie I think, and doesn't he tell her that she's pregnant, and she confirms with him that she has only been with IY? Plus, Mackie knows Kagome well enough to tell when she is lying and when she is not also, since he was with her since birth. If Mackie sees IY the way he is, wouldn't Mackie talk to him and tell him what Kagome said? Just a thought I came across rereading the story... :-)
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Reviewed By: PuppyLuvR On: December 10, 2004 16:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love this fic. I completely forgot about my medical terminology class I got so into the story. Poor Kags, Poor Inu, I know what he did was horrible but I fee so bad for him. I mean it's all a bit ironic wouldn't you say. I just can't believe he hit her. Poor, Poor Kags. She has some explaining to do and Hes got alot of apologizing 'n' ass kissing to do. I can't wait till you update!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 07:45 EST
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Damn. What's going to happen now?
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Reviewed By: kagomesjewel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 00:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness, I can't believe how it turned out. It's a complete mess, and I really want to know what's going to happen. Of course, I really want to know what Inuyasha will do if he finds out that he hit Kagome for no real reason, Naraku almost raped her, she's been running errands to help a sick friend, and that her baby is his as well. Poor Inu, he really screwed up this time...he should of trusted Kagome and let her explain instead of jumping to conclusions. But with his history of women, of course he would jump to the wrong ending. What a complicated mess! I hope you update soon if you have the time; but update AFTER you finish your homework and / or studies. Lord knows how many times I've 'forgotten' I had homework to read or write fanfiction... Happy holidays and until next chapter!
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Title: Absolutly Fabulous
Reviewed By: Inu_Nique On: December 05, 2004 23:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in love with this fic. I've never really been a fan of alternative universe Inu fics, but this one has got to be something special because I am completely into it. I've never written a review, no matter how much I've liked a story before, but I have to take the time and write one for this story. I find myself printing out chapters in the computer lab to take to work with me and read during my down time. I even put chapters in my books to read during some of my more boring class lectures. Please, keep up the excellent work. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I can't beleive how excited I am about this fic. I LOVE IT!!
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Reviewed By: ChickensEveryWhere [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 23:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
On all levels of ratings, I give this story a 10 out of 10! Damn Inuyasha for doing that. Kagome could actually lose the baby because of what he did. I love how you write this story! It seems so real, as if it was real life. I hope inuyasha gives her some time to explain.
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: CrystalMaiden87 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 18:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg thank you soooo much for updating ^.^ im so happy you write GREAT fanfics plz update soon i hope the truth is revealed soon ^.^
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Reviewed By: rinjii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 05:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god! OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! How can you just end it like that?! you have to continue! i have to know what happens! please! you need to update! i'll die if you don't! you are an amazing writer. your characters are not ooc, the plot is entertaining, and you don't have any lame self-insertion charactera! i love it! it's set in a time that most stories are not! not everything that happens in the story is perfect happily ever after stuff, which makes it more realistic. which is awsome! your story is one of the few of it's kind that i will read. i am normally a sess/kag person, but your summery sounded interesting, and once i started reading, i just couldn't stop! it's like one of the best stories ever! i love it! please oh please oh please! update like yesterday! i need to know what happens! if i don't find out i will surley die! please update a.s.a.p! so till next chap, think of your loyal loving followers, such as myself, and write your heart out. preferably before your fanclub kills you while the wait in antisipation! love ya Ciao!
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: December 04, 2004 08:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! finally an update! and OMG, drama drama!! i know i should expect nothing less angsty with how this story was going, but i do hope that things get straightened out at least a little with Inu and Kags!! hope your writer's block does not return, or if it does, that you get through it more quickly!! can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: NHB On: December 03, 2004 23:38 EST
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The last chpateru update was awesome... update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: cetacea92 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 22:51 EST
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Yay, you finally updated! Love this chapter, so much suspense! Can't wait for the next update. Damn that Naraku!
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