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| "Tokyo Sling" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is intriguing so far. You said no plot in the first chap but I swear I'm seeing one (*grin*). Looking forward to the next chap. If you don't have a beta yet, I'll give it a go. Not the greatest mind you, but willing to help. Though, I have to say, you have done a good job with the grammar and such already.
| Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 15:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey. I like this fic. My god! Is there anyone in this not totally screwed up!? ^_^ But, must admit, that's how I like 'em. So do continue. If beta-readers need only edit grammar and spelling/typos, I may be able to help you with that. But! I can' be sure for how long I can help only because I'll be having a summer job beginning at the end of June and I dunno how much that'll take out of me. Regardless, if you still need a beta, I can be a temp (maybe perm) one. Okay, please keep writing!!
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