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Title: dorina
Reviewed By: seiya374 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
where you be~!!!!! update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: dorina
Reviewed By: seiya374 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey chick just browsing through my fav fics again....hey pwease update!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: CariCennoon On: May 29, 2004 10:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
AHHHHH
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Title: My Review
Reviewed By: JC On: May 29, 2004 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it! The idea is so cool! Very orignal, so thatz one of the reasons I liked it. I'm not really a fanfic person but u made me wanna read more of it. Just a thought: Instead of using the little markers for the thoughts, maybe (if u can) do them in italics, but itz ur call on that. But overall itz really good, Keep on writing it!! :)
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Reviewed By: CariCennoon On: May 23, 2004 10:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
BOO
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Reviewed By: oych [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 21:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Here is an honest review, and if you don't liek how it sounds, I don't care. Your story has a good foundation. You have a wonderful idea, but are poorly manifestign that idea. You skip over so mant things and rush your story at times so it is easy to get lost from you jumping from thing to thing. Most inportantly though, YOU NEED TO STOP WITH THE SIDE COMMENTS. The caps do not mena that i am yellign at you, but am merely capitalizing them so you will notice those specific words. Your running commentary durign your story and your habit of keepign track of how many times Kagome and Sesshomaru sigh is very distracting and annoying. While in the first few chapters it is funny to see such comentary, as the story develops a reader prefers to read the story you write, not your personal opinion on everything you have the characters say, think, or do.
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Reviewed By: CariCennoon07 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 13:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
*gets hit by a bus*
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Title: dgirlie
Reviewed By: seiya374 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey thansk for reading my fics...yeah i hate it when people dont review...i love your story...so totally awesome..more lemons...please!!! poor kagome i would beat her rapist up if i was her.....im glad she didnt die...i dont know why mor eauthors dont use the tenseiga...kirara or kilala is hard to tell spelling cause in japan their r's and l's sound similiar...my japanese lab teacher says r's like l's....so basically to get to the point...well...anyhoo...its kirara...update soon!! and please read m fic so this is love!!! no one has even read it:(
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Reviewed By: CariCennoon07 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 17:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
lalala
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Title: I DIED!!??
Reviewed By: nightspiritfox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 17:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
-.- this is wut u do in ur spare time...TRY TO KILL ME?!MYGOD!!..and i thought i wasluved...well guess i shouldnt have eaten the luv huh...o well!(note:i didnt really read ur story cari but i rad the parts where u were talking)*shifty eyes*im gonna go before u kill me...AGAIN!
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Reviewed By: CariCennoon07 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 19:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
ditto
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Reviewed By: CariCennoon07 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 19:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
why must i review to see my reviews???
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Reviewed By: Kalabash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 18:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
im having the same prob as CariCennoon07. i cannot see my reviews so idk if im actually posting them:(
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Reviewed By: Kalabash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 18:50 CDT
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its a good story but dont interupt that much, its practically all u ever do. n dont get mad if someone flames u cause ur always gunna get flames wether u like it or not. n spell out there names. if u cant cpell it out then u really must be stupid. n ya please do use spell check n jus add their names to the spell check so u kno if their name is spelt wrong. "Souta" is spelled Sota by the way n wheres Kirara?
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Title: plz
Reviewed By: black fire angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Plz update soon. Great fanfics need updates so update or i will come over there and kill you and update it myself. (WARNING:not a real threat I don't need another reason for the law to be after my butt) Ja Ne ^_^'
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