| "Kagome, The Prized Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 230 ] |
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: Rinseternalsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story! The sarcastic humor was refreshing and very funny. The sexual tension just kept me on the edge of my seat! Great job.
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Reviewed By: ace8888888888888 On: March 10, 2005 19:46 CST
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these were great. i loved the comments of the new yorkers when inu was rushing through the streets after kikyo. that was great. and i also liked it when they were all laughing and playing cards together. that was funny. miroku is a trip and you really brought that out, which was great. i love this story, its brilliant. you are such a great writer and i hope you come up with another terrific tale.
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Reviewed By: sofrshnsocln008 On: March 03, 2005 17:16 CST
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daaaang. now if that aint a cliffy i dont know what is.
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Reviewed By: ace8888888888888 On: March 03, 2005 17:07 CST
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hahaha that was so tight. i love friends. they're like family...but different. you cant live with them,caint live witout em!
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Reviewed By: galaxia-dawn On: March 03, 2005 16:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the fact that sango didnt cry like a little girl. she respects herself and thats the best thing ever.
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Reviewed By: sofrshnsocln008 On: March 02, 2005 17:40 CST
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that was great. i take it you write so well from experience? not trying to be rude or anything by asking personal questions
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Reviewed By: ace8888888888888 On: March 02, 2005 17:05 CST
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too bad the url didnt work...i wanted to see a hott japanese guy. but the chapter was really good.
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Reviewed By: sofrshnsocln008 On: March 02, 2005 16:49 CST
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this is a great story. so glad my friend told me about it.
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Reviewed By: galaxia-dawn On: March 01, 2005 21:25 CST
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im hating u right now.
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Reviewed By: ace8888888888888 On: March 01, 2005 17:09 CST
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i cant believe they didnt do it. im happy about that though. im a virgin myself..
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Reviewed By: ace8888888888888 On: March 01, 2005 16:55 CST
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wow that was so good! i loved it. cant wait to read the rest.
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Title: soon coming soon!
Reviewed By: sailorstarfighter777(notlogged in) On: February 24, 2005 21:16 CST
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I promise it'll be soon...got writers block
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Reviewed By: sofrshnsocln008 On: February 24, 2005 16:36 CST
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that was a great chapter. i have read the others but i didnt get to reveiw ( i wasnt even supposed to be online!). so im reviewing now. i cant wait till inu gets to sess's house!
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Reviewed By: ace8888888888888 On: February 13, 2005 19:02 CST
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whaaaaat? whaaaaat?! dang. i cannot believe that. good work.
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Reviewed By: galaxia-dawn On: February 13, 2005 18:31 CST
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lol. dang, he is pretty smooth. and i cant believe that inuyasha really was innocent. whats gonna happen when they meet? i think im addicted to this story now. too bad i have homework
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