| "wish of death to wish of love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: sry
Reviewed By: ashia On: July 28, 2004 18:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
im sry its my computer you halfto type realy hard for a space
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Reviewed By: Inuyashasgirl884@aol.com On: July 13, 2004 16:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
It is a good story. But I could hardly understand it much. The grammer needs alot of work cause me and my friend read it and didn't understand much at all. but overall it was good
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Reviewed By: QueenKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 12:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
maby u should work on your grammer, but other than that, i loooooooove it! P.S this is just a piece of constructive critisism
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