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Reviewed By: swyen On: May 13, 2004 13:08 CDT
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what is taking so long for the next chapter?!!
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Title: Ch. 4 (Crash)
Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 09:22 CDT
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Ohhh Spicy! My only complaint is that I wish this chapter was longer ;-)
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Title: Ch.3 (Rurouni Star)
Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 09:15 CDT
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I have to admit I was already biased since you (Rurouni Star) are already writting one of my favorite stories "All Life's a Play". I also like your addition to the story and can't help but think how well the chapters are blending since there are several authors working together. Are youmgoing to bring up why Miroku is afraid of snails later on? It would be very amusing.
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Title: bed ridden
Reviewed By: swyen On: May 05, 2004 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just like your story. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Aeris' fangirl On: May 04, 2004 12:28 CDT
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I love this fanfic! ^_^ I rarely see Miroku/Kagome pairings but I love them. I think you are an excellent author and am trying to visit it enough to be able to tell if it's updated.
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Title: Chapter 2 (Horridporrid)
Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 12:29 CDT
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I like how your chapter blended in with Ms. Videl Son's chapter. You carried the story seamlessly and added a nice touch of humor. I thought that 'Nurse Sponge Bath" was a hilarious idea and it touched on my belief that modern day women would probably love Miroku ;-)
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Reviewed By: Megami no Eien On: April 25, 2004 14:26 CDT
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*CRIES* it's not fair that my chapter isn't next anymore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I could be sooooooo mean...*sob sob sob* oh well, I'll just have to wait and see what happens, ne? mebby I'll get even better ideas *wink wink* ~*Megami-sama, M&M Mistress*~
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Reviewed By: dancin_cutie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 21:01 CDT
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i luv the pairing! i have never read or seen a mir/kag fic before! and it's sooo good! keep on writing! please!
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Reviewed By: swyen On: April 24, 2004 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read a lot of fanfiction and I very rarely see an mir/kag relationship. I think this is a great story and I can't wait to read more.
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Title: Ch. 1
Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 21:13 CDT
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So far I really like this story. The introduction chapter caught my attention. I know I have to read further to give you a more descriptive review, but I have to leave *sob* I hope you will continue to write.
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