| "'life' and 'death'" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 16:42 CST
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CHapter 12: Tai is such an idiot! I appreciate Kagome's self control, and I hate Tai for being such a shallow, arrogant, idiotic, jerk. He is! HE is such an idiot! Errrrggg....
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 16:32 CST
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Chapter Eleven: Whoa. Miroku is scared of Kagome. Did what happened in Kagome's dream happen in real life? That would be horrible. Is Rin dead? If she isn't - will she meet Sesshomarou? And isn't it rather bad to soak metal in sudsy water and expect it to keep an edge? I dunno. I just always thought that. Whatever floats your boat... and if it doesn't, I hope you can swim! *I dunno why I said that ::sigh::*
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 16:27 CST
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Chapter 10: Doesn't anyone realize the number of toxins in a cigarette? And the number of cancers/diseases/sicknesses it can give you? People are such idiots. *points at Tai* I wonder why Sesshomarou hasn't killed him yet, by the way. I would have killed him years ago if I were Sess.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 15:31 CST
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Chapter 6: Whoa. Tai is such an idiot. How can he protect someone who is an infinitely better fighter than him? AND he runs away?
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 18:06 CDT
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loves the fic...the only confuzing part is when u start having alot of thought and each spreat thought is in the '' things 'so''the''entire''paragraph''ends''up''looking''like''this''and''it's''real ly''quite''confuzing''commas''would''be''much''better'...i hope u get my point...anyways update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 00:11 CST
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I love this story can you please update it was sooooo good I need to know what happens please
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 11:43 CST
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I love this story I hope you update it I am dieing to know what happens
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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can i give language a 20 count on this vote? you hit the mafia right on the head! excellet, and i mean, excellent job with the character dipictions, explinations, motivations and dialogue. i don't think i've been blown away by description in a long time like i was with this. excellent job. i love the line for Hojo (shaking hands like a girl..grr...i hate it when guys do that.) you have a great story here...now you need to finish it. or at least add to it. poor Sango...yash had to go to the mother, didn't he. hehe, i hope you choose to continue with the story. you have such great material here, its amazing. keep it up!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! Can't wait for the next chap.
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Reviewed By: YokoXWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really great story in my opinion. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters.
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: September 20, 2004 23:21 CDT
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w00t! lol please keep up the great work. I can't wait to find out what happens next.. I love this story so much! Krystal.
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Title: 'Life' and 'Death'
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!GREAT STORY I REALLY LOVED IT!WELL GOTTA GO SEE YA!KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: OhJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 00:46 CDT
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Hey Aitu! You are the demi-god as your penname proclaims! I finally finished reading this awesome story. Wow!!! What do you have up your sleeve for the next chapter? I can hardly wait. Thank you for all your encouraging words on MY fan fic. *giggles and blushes* :) Joy
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: September 05, 2004 03:31 CDT
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YAY! UPDATE! Please keep up the great work and update asap. I've been waiting for a new update in this stoy... I hope you get the next chapter out soon. I absolutely love your story! Krystal.
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Title: 'life' and 'death'
Reviewed By: Janeie50989 On: August 23, 2004 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I loved it I hope you finsh it.Well later sorry for the short review but I've got other things to do.BYE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this. I started reading this early in the morning and just finished it. I'd love to know what happens next and how Inuyasha finds out that Kagome moved. Are they going to get together later on in the story? Though, for some strange reason, I'd love to see Kagome and Tai together. I don't know why though. I hope you continue this and I'll continue to read it. Keep up the great writing ^___^
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol well I love being your loyal reader, especially since it's actually worth reading. I love this story and i hope to see more Kag/Inu evil fluff scenes. I love this story and i hope that you update asap. I might also go and read anything else that you've written just for shits and giggles. Is Tai just supposed to be a duplacate of Inuaysha, just with different looks and perspectives? Is Sesshomaru going to be alone in this story? I hope not, because even he needs somebody to love....made me think of the "cable guy" w/ Jim carey! but anyway, I hope you post soon. If you need a pick me up, or just somebody to talk to for shits, email me at either Miztikaldragon@msn.com/yahoo.com te he, Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Katina108notsignedin On: June 15, 2004 23:08 CDT
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great chapter! lots of information though nothing really happened, but yet it wasn't boring.. ANYHOOs, I copy and pasted the link, and all that showed up was a purse, and I wanted to see the outfit =( Keep it going and I hope you update more often!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 04:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! great chapter. Please keep up the great work. I'm all for surprises. so yeah do what you want. Quick question though... Does Kag have a thing for Sesshy? Because i'm confuzzdled. lol new word.. Update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Sanura (not signed in) On: June 10, 2004 15:14 CDT
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oooh, great chapter, please, please, please update soon, I must read more......
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Reviewed By: LightandDarkness4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEWL! lovie story! please ypdate soon! -darkness-
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Reviewed By: Sanura (not logged in) On: June 06, 2004 12:48 CDT
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Oooh, great chapter, but I have to say, I was totally unprepared for the lemon, so next time, it might be a good idea to warn people before you post a lemon, not everyone wants to read them. But other than that, the chapter was good, please update soon, I must read more
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Title: valene
Reviewed By: valene [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i love the story...great job...cant wait to see whats in store...*_*...you gonna add koga and kikyo soon...drama rules...
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this chapter was great! Please post up the next asap. I was sooo shocked with how long it was, but hey no worries, everyone's got computer problems...I love your story and can't wait for the next chapter. So keep up the great work and update asap. Your loving fan Krystal.
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Reviewed By: shirahime [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 00:27 CDT
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Ahhh that was well worth the wait! Being caught in that compromising position...I would have been mortified!! uhh wait there was that one time, or was it when...LOL. Tai is developing nicely into the inu rival. I hope you have more in store for us that deal with him. Update as soon as you can! Many thanks
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Reviewed By: Sanura (not logged in) On: May 29, 2004 09:31 CDT
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ooh, great chapter, I'm totally loving the story. Please update soon, must read more....
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Title: perfect tens all around
Reviewed By: DaemonHuntress On: May 26, 2004 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is "wow." You take writing to a whole new level. I can't believe that more people haven't reviewed. Maybe your story is a well kept secret but pretty soon everyone will know about it! Okay, so I suck at analogies.. was that even an analogy?? Am I even spelling the word right? Now look, I've made a fool of myself. If you haven't figured it out yet I love the story and it is going onto my favorites list! Everything is so interesting and exciting, I love how things keep getting twisted around and how all the tension is building up. I can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE update soon!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 00:06 CDT
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OOO that was sooo funny.. lol can't wait till you update. this story just keeps on getting better. YAY! Miroku's here!! lol i wonder what will happen when they find Inu and kag in the jacuzzi? keep up the good work and updat asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: o0ShadowXFox0o [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 15:49 CDT
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I'm speechless...you've got a rare talent with words. I enjoyed reading you story very much. Couldn't stop. lol Anyway, hope you update soon. Can't wait to see what happens. MAy God bless you and good luck.
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Reviewed By: Sanura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 07:21 CDT
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great chapter, the story is really coming along. I'm loving it, please update soon, wanna read more.
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