| "The Yami Virus" Reviews/Comments [ 379 ] |
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Reviewed By: lost yugi On: September 05, 2004 01:06 CDT
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thanks for answering so is yami oout of sight for a while i rember on of your sstories when y ou jumped ahead to when aten was a teenager in the hosptil and yami was with him then is he gooooing to be back with yame some ddday or doees yuggi have to keep the puzzle\ ps yugie maaarik and malik would bee a good mix . it woould make yami mad. see ya by.
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Reviewed By: Valea On: September 03, 2004 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sorry for not leavign my review last chapter! No worries though cause I'm here now! I hope youre doign alirght. This chapter was so cute! Ah I remember when I got my first training bra when I turned seven. And my mom was holding them up to me and I was all embarssed!!! And last chapter it was so cute to have Ryou and Bakura through the mindlink as he ate some of that...stuff! It was hilarous!!! Another year, and and Aten gets older...poor guy....but still it was happiness!!!!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: September 03, 2004 20:06 CDT
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: September 02, 2004 23:02 CDT
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That was so hilarious! ^_^ Aria sent the bra to the shadow realm, how I'd wish I could do that. lol. ^_^ It was so funny that it appeared on Battle Ox's horn. hehehe. So Yami says goodbye forever, glad Yugi told him to leave for good, even if he's coming back into the story later. Anyways, it was definitely a great ch. Till next time. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: September 02, 2004 20:47 CDT
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My name was spelt wrong las thing -_-;
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Reviewed By: Broekn Time On: September 02, 2004 20:47 CDT
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Forever? Yami's really gone? *whips out dance music and party streamers* Yaaaaaay!
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Reviewed By: Shade Azuna On: September 02, 2004 19:07 CDT
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Hi! I'm back! You know, it's really funny. My sister's birthday is on August 25th and when I saw that Robbie's birthday was then, I just had to laugh. I did the same thing with my friend's birthday in some YGO-Harry Potter crossover I'm writing. But enough of that. I loved this chapter (and the ones before it!) to death. I remember when my mom took me bra shopping. Really frustrating. I never wanna do it again. I'm really glad the yamis are back (well, maybe not Yami, but whatever). I cried when Marik died. I know it's going back a few chapters, but I miss them and I felt bad about that. Sorry! I'll try to review more frequently next time! Bye for now!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 09:44 CDT
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*squishes plushie* Oh, goodness, bra shopping...Lord, I am glad I have a boy!! I would so be Kura!! Ha! Aria sent the bra to the shadows. I would love to do that! I hate the damn things!! *squeals loudly and wakes the dead* Robbie's birthday is the same as mine!! *squeals again* LOL!! Battle Ox complete with horn bra!! Lovely!!! Oh, girl!! Take care!!
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Reviewed By: Seto's girl16 (formerly 'Dranzer's Yami) On: September 02, 2004 09:44 CDT
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Yes!!! Finally!!! I'm glade Yugi finally put the permanent boot to Yami. I think that in the next story (just a sujestion) that you should make it so that Yugi hooks up with someone, or maybe joins one of the already formed couples. I know you said that Yami will come back in the next story but is he still going to try and kill Aria and Aten? Cuse if he does *huggles Aria and Aten* he's gott aget through me! *grabs Millenium rod* Marik: "Hey give me back my Rod!" And is he eventually going to be destroyed or something like that? Anyhoo, keep up with the chappies!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 09:10 CDT
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I still can`t get over how good this story is. Thanks for putting in more of Asher. He is becoming a favorite. I am surprised that Seto didn`t faint from Aria saying bra so much. But this is his princess so it makes sense. I loved the flirting between Marik and Meranda, poor Malik, every time Marik sees her he has problems. I`m sure he doesn`t complain too much during, though.
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Reviewed By: Mariku182 On: August 31, 2004 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha-o!!! *cough-cough* stupid cold... Ok. Today review... no complaining... gimme a second... I need to breathe... ok... Cuuuuuteeeeeeeeeee!!!!! The kids making breakfast *Cough* for their mom! The birthday party! The ANZU BASHING! This chapter has been one of the best chapters you ever wrote!!! *goes on a coughing fit* *Wheeze* I Cand bweave... anyways... I hope that the following story will be as cool and entretaining as this one. Allways Your only weird reviewer and worshipper: Mariku182. Huggie & kissy *~* Ja~Ne!!!*~*
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Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 16:00 CDT
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Oh, poor Ryou, poor Bakura. Flashbacks can be a bitch. I can't wait till the next story! Not that I want this one to end, but it sounds interesting.... *hugs you* you're the bestest! =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: August 29, 2004 20:29 CDT
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That was a good chappy. ^_^ very fitting to have Ryou's birthday, since Ryou's birthday is in 4 days. ^_^ hehe. Heh, the poor scorpion, getting stuck w/ Anzu. The end was sad too. Stupid Yami, *bangs him on the head* So the next ch. the chibis turn 9? That's cool. ^_^ I might not be able to review as much now, cuz school starts again. *sigh* Well, till next time. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 14:09 CDT
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Oh my!! This chappie was wonderful. Very sad at the end. I suppose that it'll be awhile before he can do this without seeing Yami. I know it's hard. Sometimes, even 20 years later, I still have flashbacks. I am just lucky to have a man who understands this. Oh, I can't believe we are going to a new story!! I have followed you this far, I will be there till you can't write anymore!! Take care!!
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 12:40 CDT
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Oh no! The story is almost done!! TT So sad!! But the next story will come out soon. Ah, I can't believe Bakura thought Ryou was Yami. That must have hurt Ryou bad. I can't wait to see the kids birthdays! So cute!! Aten and Aria are just adorable. Happy early birthday chibi's!!
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