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 Reviewed By: Valea  On: July 08, 2004 00:03 CDT
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(im back from camp) and im so liek freaking sad now everything is so messed now! *cries* thats why yugi looked so old and why everythings happeneding. i feel for ryou, so noble making th eultimate sacrifice!
 Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 07, 2004 22:19 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Yep, Kaiba's Public Relations is going to be really busy. Those homophobic bastards, how could they do that to Tris and Otogi's stuff? At least they found a nice place to live in. Go Aria! She definitely made that mean lady scared. *snickers* This ch. was incredibly peverted even though it was without lemons. ^_^ lol. Aten's so funny especially when he's saying perverted thing w/o even knowing it. ^_^ So the next ch. is going to be Ryou/Bakura lemon? YAY! ^_^ Me love lemons especially with Ryou/Bakura. Till next time then. Ja ne!
 Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 07, 2004 15:25 CDT
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...How could you? You always treat your characters like crap!! And now... *sob* Tris and Otogi's stuff is... GONE (except for the apron, of course). And mind you, I know it's just stuff, but still, did you have to do the pig thing... that was just sad. *laughs* Camp Shitting Bear. You just couldn't resist, could you.
 Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl  On: July 05, 2004 17:05 CDT
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Oh yeah, and thanks for the virtual plushies. ^_^ And again, great story. Ja ne!
 Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl  On: July 05, 2004 17:02 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Hmm, that book is pretty interesting. So now Marik's back to his old ways, Vera's up to no good, Malik's hurting, and no one is stopping this? Lol. Great drama. This definitely a great story. Well, till next time. Ja ne.
 Reviewed By: CrazyKins  On: July 03, 2004 17:05 CDT
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That ending scence with Marik and Malik seemed strange the way he took some of his life force... I hope this doesn't have to do with the virus. Malik also says "he hasn't done that in a long time". Did that happen before, because I must have missed some stuff. ^_* I also feel so bad for Yugi, being all alone. At least he's got Joey to be there.
 Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 03, 2004 14:13 CDT
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You coward!!!! Hiding behind a child! *sniffles and walks away**gives a cookie to Malik*
 Reviewed By: Broken Time  On: July 03, 2004 12:33 CDT
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Alright, time for good point bad point! Good point - Bakura seems back to normal.. Bad point - Ryou's life force is cut in half.. Good point - Marik has more life force.. Bad point - He stole it from Malik, even though his hikari had given him some life force already.. Good point - The kids seem to take it well.. Bad point - Donny and Alex are in the hospital.. Good point - Yami died.. Bad point - Yuugi's heart broken over it.. And the last Good point - Jaimen has 2 daddies who love him a lot.. All I can think of right now ^_^;
 Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl  On: July 03, 2004 00:57 CDT
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Intersting chapter. Yami's dead (thank Ra, sorry Yugi), that's one evil gone, and here comes Vera, another one. Lol. She's so mean to the chibis and it sounds like she's one of those people that disses the gay. :P I've liked it if Miranda had called Marik, it would've been fun. ^_^ So Ryou's going to give half his life to Bakura, that's so kind of him. Ryou/Bakura forever. Till tomorrow then. Ja ne!
 Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 02, 2004 00:14 CDT
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Wow, Vera is a biatch! She reminds me of another Vera from a V. C. Andrews book. I wish Miranda HAD called Marik... he'd've had a good time kicking her around. Heck, I'd've had fun whipping her. Vera is quite not nice. From Miranda's personality, I never would have guessed she could have a sibling or even parent that way. Did she turn out more like her father? Poor Aten, and Robbie, and Miranda. I hope that Miranda's pains are nothing serious. Stupid Vera. I'm kind of glad that Yami is dead, too. It's just not right that he just got in without having his heart weighed against the feather. *shakes head* Keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper  On: July 01, 2004 15:57 CDT
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Grr.... I hate Vera... more than I hated Yami.... :K Praise Ra he's dead! ^-^ Sure, you begin the cruel person you are, will have him come back or something evil like that... I still think you should make him and Tea marry... :) Poor Robbie.... and Aten... they don't deserve that... I loath Vera.... * pokes her, then pokes her off a cliff*.... Yeah! ^_^
 Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 01, 2004 14:35 CDT
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Do you WANT to make me cry? 'Cause your quickly on your way to doing it... Why does everyone feel they must break up true love? *smacks you*
 Reviewed By: Broken Time  On: July 01, 2004 11:24 CDT
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Geh... Evil evil Vera... I'm sure nobody would want a sister like that. Or a mother like Miranda's, either... And Ryou going to cut his life in half?? At least it's going to a good cause..
 Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper  On: June 30, 2004 21:46 CDT
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wow... o.o Buying a house's hard... I can't reply as often as I want... Grr...... anyhoo.... Poor donny.. and alex... you really can't let the nice guys die.... :( On the plus side, Yami's dying! ^_^ Sorry yugi.... Buuut, YEAH! ^_^_^ I absolutely love the next chapter title...... please oh pppppllllllllleeeeaaaaaase let him die.. * is knocking on wood* :D 'course, you need him and all... so I guess you'll have to let him live.. or revive the jerk later.... Awwiiiiie.... I love this fic! ^_^ and I'd type more, but I'm half-asleep! ^-^zzz
 Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 30, 2004 01:35 CDT
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I'm glad Yugi is okay. I have no sympathy for Yami, though. You're right, he is getting what he deserves. I just hope that Bakura and Marik can hang on until somethign happens to cure them... Jamien's separation anxiety was hard to handle. Poor kid. And Donny and Alex... I hope they'll be okay; Zira might be in a wee bit of trouble if they aren't, ne? Keep up the good work!
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