| "The Yami Virus" Reviews/Comments [ 379 ] |
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 17:44 CDT
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Wow. I think Yami needs to be hurt. Yugi's revenge is gonna be good, I'm sure. Retribution for his evilness. Excellent chapter. You're so good, I didn't think it was POSSIBLE for you to improve, but you seem to just be getting better and better! As I read, I had to listen to the songs. It made the emotion come out even better. Best of all, you released the chapter on my birthday! Yay! *Squishes you and gives you many, many plushies in thanks* Keep up the unbelievably amazing work!
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 12:39 CDT
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Oh, my Ra!! That was soo sad!!!!! Lord, I am going to kill Yami myself!! That egotistical, selfish, good for nothing, bastard!! May the gods see him for what he truely was and is. Lemon?? Revenge lemon?? Oh, my!! Why we gotta wait so long?? It's driving me CRAZY!!! LOL! I know you have good reason. You always do!! Tell DDYD that I send squishies that way too!! *Squishes Kurasgirl again*
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Title: .. Burn...O.O
Reviewed By: Harvestgirl 64 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awie..... So sad.... *has moment of silence, before breaking out the weapons of mass destruction* Well, I've gotta go find Yami and burn his body to a smoldering pile or garbage.. Oh wait, I can't... Stupid molar.. ¬_¬ Oooh, And Itemri's gonna be SO Happy when Aria has her fifth and second surviving child... at 18..Someone's going to be killed for Spaaawning... Tsk tsk *hands Baku a weapon too* Unless it's Seto.. I dunno why, But Seto and Aria seem so cute and right!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 09:05 CDT
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Awww.. it's so sad how Marik dies. I always thought Yami's would be invincible... like newscasters. It was really sad; I was close to tears! I can't wait to see how this story ends, happy or sad. But 'neways awesome chapter!
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Reviewed By: Lost light On: August 20, 2004 03:22 CDT
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your stories get better as you go your real good at captureing the emotion. poor bakura hes going to be mentaly scared fo awhile. Is yugi gooing to get back at him maybbe he can get marik too help tye hiim up and give hiim atasst of his own medicne. ii don't no whyy yugiii woud wast his tiime by makeing yami come oout and watch people like him don't care see ya later
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Title: Yeah! ^_^
Reviewed By: Harvestgirl 64 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! It's Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper.. I finally got an account here! ^_^ *does happy dance* I'm so glad Baku's alright.. Well, Okay.. :/ Poor guy... At least he's with Ryou now, and Marik and Malik,.... as long as that jerk Yami's not near him... Keep up the great work.. No more hurting Baku.. Or do I need to get the weapons of Mass Destruction back out? ¬_¬
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Title: more please
Reviewed By: yamialex17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is sssssssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooooooo freaking good so far please don't stop write thanx yamialex17
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Title: it's me Shadow M.
Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: August 18, 2004 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Bakura is brought back to life. *mumbles over Yami being brought back to life as well* It's all his fault Bakura is in so much pain. ^_^' hehe. But at least he got yelled at by Yugi, Ryou, and Aten. hehehe. And yes of course I want a sequel. Why wouldn't I? I love ur stories! *hugs back* hehe. Can't wait till next time. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Mariku182 On: August 17, 2004 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA-O!!!* starts jumping up and down exitedly* Waiiii!!!! You did it!!! Thank you for using the song. (As I was reading the fanfic I couldn't help to play the song.) *Bows repeatedly saying 'Thank You' over and over again* *stops* Dizzy... Need Nappie... *grabs Chibi Yami Marik who happened to be around and cuddles close to it* ...Bai~Bai, Till next Chappie...
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Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe (not logged in) On: August 17, 2004 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there! I know I haven't reviewed in a really long time, but I have been reading this story throughout the summer and it's just keeps getting better and better! I love the chapter where Aria thinks that Tristan is being so polite and nice to Otogi buy helping him clean-up the nacho cheese sauce they were using. Such a classic!! Keep up the fantastic work!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 13:35 CDT
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM AM SO HAPOPY NOW! eVERYTHING IS RIGTH AGAIN!Besides the fact that Yami is back but he got told off by Yugi and Ryou so its okay! And Aten went off him too and just...yay! this chapter rocked, things were set right, even with the painful scene with Bakura coming back but still! soembody! break the puzzle! SMASH IT!!!! GARRHHH. lol luv u! *hugs*
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye @_@ On: August 17, 2004 11:45 CDT
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Huzzzah!! Heeeeeeeeee'ssss Baaaaaaaacckkk!!! Damn Yami anyways!! You go Ryou!! Go Yugi!! Go Chibi Marik!! Aten understands. So sad that he understands only too well what happened. What a chappie!! OH! I love it! *squishes Bakurasgirl and stabs Yami*
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: August 17, 2004 11:34 CDT
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Bakura is back! Horrah! But he's in so much pain.. I liked the songfic half, it was coolio!
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Reviewed By: lost light On: August 16, 2004 03:29 CDT
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hey greeeat storie.I hhhope they get bakura awayy from yami soon . will Marik tel Yugi that yami is rapeiing bakura . I hope yami didn't breakk kurass spirt he want be the ssame for awhile Ii guess hugs bakura . actually i reeead iin ooone of my eygtian books that if the face of the mummy is smashed they ca'nt find theere way back too there body or soome thing like thaat so burn the mummy. Will Bakkura be afaid of yami after this. see ya soon . tthe way yamii is treating kura is the way somepeople believe you train animals i had a riding teeeacher alng time og who belieaved in beaating the animal intoo submison I quet goooing becaussse there are other ways .
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Reviewed By: anubiset On: August 16, 2004 02:48 CDT
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Just read the next several chapters. Thanks for making sure Kura comes back, I could care less about the Pharaoh. Asher is a very unique individual. I would like to see more of him. He is great for scaring the pricks. Can`t wait for the updates. I love your works. It took me days to get through them all, the kids were terrorizing me. I`ll be keeping an eye out for the updates. You have also inspired me to try my hand at writing. If I can be a quarter as good as you are I`ll consider myself lucky. I am having brain freezes though. I hope to one day put my fic up here. Thanks for the inspiration. Your loyal fan, anubiset.
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