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Reviewed By: AoA On: July 28, 2004 23:42 CDT
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mmm, lovely chapter, darling ^_~ I'm most delighted to have read it. *looks about, snickers before winking again and fading out*
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Reviewed By: Shadow Sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 18:16 CDT
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Yes. My fellow Hiei lovers and I will resort to violence if you do not make him the object of our affections. I, personally, will be forced to rip out your still beating heart and shove it down your throat and watch you choke to death on it should you make me fall in love with Kurama. Don't get me wrong, Kurama is wonderful, and I care for him, but I am strictly a Hiei lover. Thank you for taking the time to read my threat, and have a good day. (I really hope you don't think I'm a proper little bitch, because I'm not. I just get very into threatening authors who might make me fall in love with someone other than Hiei. But still, have a nice day!! And enjoy your vacation. I just hope you don't come up with a big case of writer's block!!)
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Reviewed By: andromedacblack [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 11:42 CDT
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Another thing...if this en't Hiei, I won't read and will sic Pooh Bear on you!!! (believe me...not fun) I'm a very devoted weirdo ^_^ HIEI HIEI HIEI HIEI HIEI - OOF! *gets shot down by a random Kurama fangirl* @_@ Ow
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Reviewed By: andromedacblack [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 15:26 CDT
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YES!!! I make good threats! Mwahahahahah, now if I used them in school do you think I could get some people to leave me the hell alone, or even better, FEAR ME?!? (evil little grin) I love...err...this CYOA?!? (notices Hiei out of the corner of her eye) Uhh...RUNNING NOW!!! Even though I can't run...uhh...OH WELL!
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Mukando [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 14:11 CDT
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wait, you said hieixreader OR kuramaxreader! what about kurama! O_O;; anyways, i love this fic. it makes me think...which in turn makes me confused, but OH WELL! anyways, it's a great fic, and although i hav no idea where it's going, i enjoy reading it. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: d.j. On: July 17, 2004 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Wind Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 00:32 CDT
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This is amazing!! Your idea is fascinating...this idea would make a good original fic too. So, about the pairings, I'm kinda confused, am I going to have to choose one over the other??
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Reviewed By: AoA ^_^ On: July 15, 2004 23:18 CDT
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o.O *looks at the review before mine* ...---- ah p-chan, hideous way to end the chapter... mostly because damn't i want more! *stomps around before flopping down cross-legged on the floor* i'm not moving till i get more *nodnod*
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Reviewed By: andromedacblack [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS CYOA!!! (screaming at the top of her lungs) And this had better become a Hiei CYOA, or I will HURT you. I will bite your ankle, chop off your wrists and tongue, and, well, I have a katana and a flamethrower and I know how to use them!!! Well, not the flamethrower, but O WELL!!! Mwahahahahah hack cough gag die HAH! (eye twitches)
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Mukando [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 10:18 CDT
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hah! i reviewed every chapter!!... i think... O.o
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Mukando [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 10:17 CDT
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YAY! KURAMA PLUSHIE! that's on my wish list of things ill prolly never get! ^_^ yes, i hav heard the ketchup song. some ppl at my school did a dance to it... ^_^ ANYoro, NICE FIC! update soon, it left me...like this O_O on edge of seat. unable to leave. yea. it's DAT good. lol. could you maybe check out mine and give some advice?! i would appreciate it! >< oh yea... the standard.. UPDATE SOOOOOOOON!
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Mukando [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 09:20 CDT
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hah! i knew it! i went forward in tiem! im shooo smart! hiei: didnt it say something like that in the summary? saph:>< are you saying im not smart?! hiei: yes. saph: >< shut up. also, dear author, if i annoy you with my random... thigns, just tell me to lay off the reviewing, and i will obey your wish... *bows*
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Mukando [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 09:05 CDT
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ah, roses *drowns in roses* ^_^ kurama: she died smiling.... saph(me): anyways, im guessing marionette is a puppet, cause all these chapter titles are like puppet thingies... invisible strings, sitting on a shelf... hyup. you're one smart person. unlike me. MY CYOA SUCKS!! >
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Mukando [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 09:01 CDT
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IT WAS A GHOST!! >
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Mukando [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 08:54 CDT
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dude, you'er some kickass author, ya know that, right?! >< and if no one has ever told you that, then i dont know whats wrong with people! ^_^
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