| "Love from two inudemons" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: foxi_vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 18:06 CDT
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aww can u plz make this a sess/kag fic
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Reviewed By: Horse_Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 21:35 CDT
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must keep writing! love your story!
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon22000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 20:55 CDT
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OH AND FLUFFY/KAGOME
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon22000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLz UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOON OK!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon22000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOO PLz UPDATE ASAP OK! OK! OK! OK! OK! OK! OK! OK! OK! OK! OK! OK! OK! OK! OK!!!... Ummmmmmmmmm sorry anyhoo PLz update very soooooon K!
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Reviewed By: inuyashagirl0208 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 18:26 CDT
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i would choose sess/kag in tjis fic but not in tv. even if inu love kag,that doesn't give him the right to treat kag like shit!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyashagirl0208 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 18:23 CDT
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whoo!!!!i like so love ur fic. more hentai and update soon. PPPPLLLZZZZ.
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Title: Some little hints about writing quality
Reviewed By: Another Kitty On: April 25, 2004 06:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, surely not the best rewiev. However, if you just get 'Hey it's great' you are not going to get better. The idea has potential - but the writing style could be improved - also, as far as I know, noone ever got hurt by running a spellcheck and grammar needs improving too. WHAT YOUR LIEING BITCH."Said Inuyasha.~How dare she accuse kikyo of hurting her.~Inuyasha thought angrily. What are you lying about, why are you lying - but 'what your lying bitch' is not even close to a grammatical correct sentence. Make that an ' Angrily glaring at the young woman, Inuyasha bit out an 'Why are you lying about this? Kikyo would never hurt you willingly'. It protrays that Inuyasha is angry at the suggestion that Kikyo hurt Kagome, and also makes pretty clear that he does not believe her at all. It is alot more fun reading a good idea if it comes in nicely wrapped spelling and grammar. Also -(kikyo's name will not be capitalized.) - let's be honest here, that is a truely childish reaction. Sure, the situation is not nice for Kagome, but think about Kikyo for a moment: You get betrayed and killed by the love of your life, then someone resurrects 50 years later, and the guy who swore to love and protect you always dotes on your always happily smiling reincarnation, seemingly forgetting you even exist. Now, what would you do in this situation? Kill yourself so the girl that stole your man will happily live ever after? Stand by smiling while they are happy when you lost everything? Inuyasha, the jewel, even your life? You sacrificed alot for that hanyou, and what does he do? Running of with the next best woman that just looks a bit like you? Mind you, this does not mean I think Kikyo is right in what she does. It just means, I can understand why she does not like Kagome much
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what happens next what happens next? tell me tell me tell me!!!! plz update!!!! much love never forget the love!
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Title: Kool
Reviewed By: Spica(not logged on) On: April 24, 2004 19:22 CDT
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I like this so far. I vote for Sesshoumaru. 'Cause he won't hurt poor Kaggie. isn't that right Cuddles
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon22000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshomaru/Kagome all the way. there the best pairing ever made. But SUCKS that the anime is not like that. DAMN IT!!!!!
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Title: It should be Sesshoumaru!
Reviewed By: CLueless On: April 24, 2004 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want Kagome to chose Sesshoumaru over Inuyasha. I think they will make a good pairing instead Inuyasha and Kagome. Too bad the t.v. series is not like that. Darn!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: "reid" On: April 24, 2004 12:43 CDT
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i do think she should choose sesshomaru, it just makes more sense! i like how kagome isn't a pushover, at least she doesn't seem like one....
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Title: Sess it will be!
Reviewed By: SessyLover On: April 23, 2004 23:03 CDT
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I hope she chose Sesshomaru. Inuyasha is a boy. Sess is a man. Kagome needs a man.
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Title: Hah!
Reviewed By: inu23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave myself a review......^_^
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