Title: Falling Tears Reviewed By: Cortheira Blackelf On: April 23, 2004 18:14 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: I really liked the story. I am not even close to liking anime, but I still thought it was good. I should write one like this for Orlando Bloom... anyways, the writing was descriptive, though Xeph, think about spreading out describing parts. just a thought. Keep it up. :D
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