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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 20:16 CDT
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you should go through and change all of the "&" symbols to "and." Really, it's not considered good grammar, or even good writing, to abbreviate words or use symbols./////////////// Also, I reall hope this is a Inu/Kag pairing. And if Kouga is in it, please be nice to him. Everyone makes him the bad guy when he really isn't. He's always horribly out of character. If you look closely at how he acts in the manga or in the anime, you'll see that he's a good guy. A little dense, but not stupid.
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 00:00 CDT
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harry's inner prat...I LOVE IT!!!!
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Title: Awesome story
Reviewed By: Inu-Yasha fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey listen love the story want you to write more.And by the way Harry would be in his 6th year since the last book was the 5th.So Harry can do magic outside of school.Plus I think you should make Kagome the new defense against the darks arts teacher.That would be so cool.Plus I think you should write what Harry got on his O.W.L.s
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Reviewed By: eMeLyNoOoPeE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 02:48 CDT
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interesting indeed. but i do like it it's very different from the other harry potter/inuyasha thangs... but hey it's your thang right? but out of curiousity will Inuyasha himself be in this fic? And it does make me think will this fic only be going on during their summer time and end before harry returns to school or will she be following him cause like dumbledore will be needing her assistants of some sort??? Also is she a miko or is it just purely with and wizards and warlocks??? well i await your next installment
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Reviewed By: iy lvr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it so far, update please ^-^
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 00:31 CDT
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hi my name is sango and grrr goes to my school, i'll get her to update for ya! also if you have questions or comments plz E-mail me at: aquaofxmen@aol.com thanx ^_^
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Reviewed By: HeHe ~_^ On: May 18, 2004 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOW? OK. :( NOW? NO! FINE! NOW????????? HOW ABOUT NOW??????????????
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Reviewed By: HeHe ~_^ On: May 18, 2004 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE?!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fic chick On: May 10, 2004 16:47 CDT
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Awesome fic! I think it'd be funny if Inuyasha came to 'visit' and came in contact with the Dursleys. LOL.
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! I AM ADDING YOU TO MY FAVORITES SO UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OK?
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Reviewed By: lianner On: May 09, 2004 21:56 CDT
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harry/kagome pairing i hope!!!
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Reviewed By: lololololololuuuuuuuuu On: May 09, 2004 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: hoiiiiijiiiii On: May 09, 2004 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic h/k pairring please!!!!!!!!*puppy dog face*
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Reviewed By: bbbbloi On: May 09, 2004 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv your fic please make it a harry/kagome pairring
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 18:55 CDT
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as always u have the best fan fics on line by the 14th. e- mail me then love, sango
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