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Reviewed By: AshaCrone On: May 13, 2005 22:43 CDT
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You have to work on your spelling and grammar, and some on your pacing. I like Kaiba and Jou, and the idea is okay, just needs lots of polishing. No, this is not a flame. You just need to work on your writing skills, which are different from plot. Good luck to you!
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Reviewed By: insight_to_insanity On: March 14, 2005 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SETO'S THERE TO RAVISH JOU-CHAN!! No? Not yet? Awwww! Dia sounds pretty shibby, always nice for Jou to be able to talk to someone about his illicit love for Kaiba ^_~
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Reviewed By: Envious_love On: January 31, 2005 19:33 CST
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I haven't gotten very far on your story. The idea is good but cliche. I've seen it numerous times before, try adding something different to it? Do you have a beta? Perhaps you should look into one. In general it seems good but like I said a good beta would help. This could easily be an exceptional story. Take your time finding a beta, you don't want some person who thinks they can beta or someone who will take your ideas. I'm hope you realise this isn't a flame, but friendly advice from a fellow canadian. Please think about the beta.
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Title: meh
Reviewed By: Yaoi-junkie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 09:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
blash
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess(not logged in) On: June 18, 2004 17:41 CDT
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Aww, it's done! Really awesome ficcy. I'd read your InuYasha/Yu-Gi-Oh story, but I've only seen 3 episodes. ;_; Sounds awesome though. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Yaoi-junkie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 09:54 CDT
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thanks to all who're reviewing!
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 22:01 CDT
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I really like your story theres alot of love between them.I like how it took them a long time to find eachother but I'm glad they did.they made this story worth reading.I will read this story more than once.If there are more chapters please post tell me what the sequeal is.
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter alot and can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: d On: June 12, 2004 12:08 CDT
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i like it
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Reviewed By: mage of black flames On: June 11, 2004 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY SO I HOPE YOU PLANE ON FINSHING IT, CAUSE IF YOU DONT I WILL BE VERY HURT THAT SUCH A GREAT STORY WOULD BE LEFT UNFINISHED!!!!
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 22:21 CDT
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hey this is my favorite fic of yugiho.please write more when you can...I can't wait to see what happenes to them.
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Title: ok I am going to do it right now
Reviewed By: songiesworld [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 16:31 CDT
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I read the review you left on Tari Helanywe's Out of the Closet and I thought that you picked a awesome title for her language. Also I am going to review later on tonight on how I liked your story because I have to go to work from seven to midnight. You got alot of good review on it so it has to be good. Songie ^_^
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Reviewed By: mage of black flames On: June 09, 2004 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as the ruler of hell, i order you to continue writing this awesome story! it so good, i really, really, really freakin' love it!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Tari Helyanwe
Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi again!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! *sigh* they are the perfect couple!! Oh, did I mention I wrote a Kouga/Inu one-shot lemon?? Well, I hope you enjoy my fanfic, and please contiue writing!!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 22:09 CDT
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This fic rocks. You rock. Keep writing more chappies okay?
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