| "My Shinigami, My Hamburger" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: AsakaSama On: February 21, 2005 06:26 CST
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I love it! You might want to watch the comma usage though, sometimes you put commas where good old fashioned periods should be. Question though: If Heero is based on Heero, who is Shinigami based on? Duo? Because lately I haven't seen much mention of a certain famouse hair do-which will remain nameless-that a certain God of Death should have. But that's just me being nit picky.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: February 20, 2005 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This fic is great, so please keep writing. I can't wait to see what happens next. It's always funny when Heero gets caught up in Shini's illusions.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: February 13, 2005 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic so far. It's awesome and I can't wait for you to update. It's a great idea and it's so fun to read!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 22:00 CST
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You won't hear any complaining from me - I'm just durn glad you updated! Poor Heero-kun... if he isn't careful, Shini is going to weasel his way into the grumpy guys heart. I just love how Shini's curiosity gets the better of him, although it would appear that he isn't as innocent as he tries to imply. "Yes, I'll stand here like a statue until you return, Teishu. Or at least until you turn that corner..." So, did the old fart change his mind because he found out Heero's married, or had he planned it all along, or did Shinigami "nudge" him? Wonderful job once again!
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Reviewed By: NightCrystal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good story.Duo and Heero are written perfectly for this story.I couldn't see Heero giving to quickly to Shini's charms,it wouldn't be right cause the story would be over to quickly.They are just perfect.I cann't wait to read more of this story,please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kari-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 08:31 CST
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That was good! please finish~!! I wanna see What happens~!! Please don't leave me hanging like this...I need my Heero and Duo! (They're what started me out on Yaoi) Wilt thou leave me so unsatsfied?!!?!!? ._.;
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Title: Loving it so far
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kaat On: November 29, 2004 06:26 CST
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Although I am not normally one to enjoy a whiny Duo, I thought this was very enjoyable. I certainly am curious as to what you were smoking while you wrote it...but enjoyable none the less. I couldn`t help but laughing at some of the situations that Duo and his mother could get themselves into...let alone the whole Valentine world. I like the way you make the reader find out what the background is a little at a time (like peeling and onion) rather than having it thrown at us with no warning in a lump. It`s very interesting and I would like to see it finished soon, I have never been a patient person. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your work!
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Reviewed By: Renee L Demers On: October 23, 2004 17:41 CDT
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I love Melissa Etheridge! My mom got her album "Lucky" and I like listening to it. Love the story, aww... ain't they sweet!
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Reviewed By: Lain of the Azure Sky (mm member) On: October 10, 2004 18:32 CDT
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Another wonderful chapter, Congratulations! Please update soon, 'cause it makes my own school day bearable to come home and see a fantastic update from you!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 21:53 CDT
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YEA! A Bee!! And an update! aww the kiss was going so well too! *pouts* I wish Duo could handle things a bit better but he's so adorable!!
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Title: ch.15
Reviewed By: ~Esukafruone~ On: September 28, 2004 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I enjoy reading this story very much! This Duo's childishness and Heero's grumpiness are great entertainment, and I hope to see more!
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 13:32 CDT
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I knew it, giggle, Shini doesn't know anything about modern time bathrooms. lol, ladies room.. Oh, he is soooo sweet and hugable How long is Heero able to resist him? Sigh, the way it was until now I'd say that Shini will have to do a little more than look adorable and making puppy dog faces to persuade Heero to fall in love with him. But what could Shini do? I don't know... got to wait for the next chapter, ne?
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Reviewed By: Lain of the Azure Sky (mm member) On: September 15, 2004 15:24 CDT
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o.o I can understand your geometric pain v.v. I'm so glad you updated! I could almost sense an update on this story, since you got another chapter up for 'The One-Eared Neko' a few days ago ^^. I hope you get the next chapter out soon!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 11:47 CDT
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Spidy go squishy! aww poor shini lost his pet. hmm I liked geometry when I was in high school, i'd offer to tutor after i've had a refresher/ quick look at the book for your class buuuut i work better one on one, i'm not sure how it would work through email or computer *their somewhat impersonal* Good luck to you! and update when ya can *rubs her head, shesh i feel old, hobles away with cane*
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OH, what a wonderfull fic. Shini is soooo sweet, giggle, for a Shinigami. A pet-spider? What is he going to want next? A cobra? lol, Oh, and he finally gets the much needed wash. Hmm, shower? I bet Shini never before had had a shower. Heero should prepare for a suprise. I'm looking for the next chapter.
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